KHR: Storm Warning (Fran, Bel)

Dec 24, 2008 21:17

Rating: PG-13
Genre: Mild Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Summary: Fran is the new mist and Bel is irked. Continuation of Meeting of Mist.

The story felt unfinished so here we go again.

This one's for the Fran fans. )

!khr fic, .ffnet

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strangertrack December 25 2008, 23:40:54 UTC
Xanxus is down in the basement grieving with alcohol.... over the loss of the sky ring 10 years ago. >_> Uncaring bastard! <3

Fran.... reminds me of a male version of Chrome. Not a bad thing, only now I wonder what their battles will be like.

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strangertrack December 26 2008, 02:31:22 UTC
O_______O

I wasn't even thinking of that. I was just thinking of their personalities... how they're lacking in social awareness and very frank with speaking their minds without considering the consequences. Which rubs people the wrong way and makes them seem standoffish.

But damn, now that you put that idea in mind, that would be EPIC if Mammon was the Rokudo to Fran's Chrome, coming out only to kick ass and then disappearing. *_______* I've decided. That's my new theory for what happened to Mammon. And that explains why Fran gives off such Mammon vibes and kind of took on his looks.

(Does that mean Bel = Ken, going around saying, "You suck and we hate you, Fran. Now bring out Mammon"?)

Happy holidays to you, too~!

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twentyfiveraven January 4 2009, 23:59:53 UTC
Very happy you continued this, yes <3

Your Bel and Fran interaction was just amazing, it was so in-character. Bel's so vicious, I love it.

"Liiiiiiies. Liiiiiiiiies. The filthy peasant tells lies!"
^ Really love this line for some odd reason.

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strangertrack January 5 2009, 02:29:32 UTC
Thanks! I write so much Varia crack that I fool myself into thinking they're fluffy kittens instead of deadly assassins.

It's fun to switch to something serious and write them with an edge. :D

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kriemhild39 January 5 2009, 11:26:23 UTC
i'm really glad that you continued this :3

bel really misses mammon, doesn't he?
...and where the hell is xanxus? what is that guy doing..

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strangertrack January 5 2009, 14:15:13 UTC
Xanxus is being Xanxus, waiting to make his grand entrance at the very last second. :D

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rai_kai_lai January 5 2009, 22:24:30 UTC
So awesome, la~
The first one was awesome and this is even better. *ttly wants to see Bel castrating Lussuria nao*

Love the last line, though. Can't wait for the next one.

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strangertrack January 6 2009, 02:52:46 UTC
*ttly wants to see Bel castrating Lussuria nao*

Bel better not. Lussuria will probably enjoy it. D:

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glowingcitrus January 10 2009, 21:46:48 UTC
xD Aw~ Poor Fran.

I love your story~
More please :3

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strangertrack January 11 2009, 01:45:11 UTC
Haha, crying Fran icon is so appropriate.

Thanks for the reminder that this is still unfinished! Now if only I can stop being so lazy.... D:

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glowingcitrus January 11 2009, 03:56:18 UTC
:'D I know, right?

No prob. :]
Don't worry, I'm a friend of procrastination, as well. He takes daily visits just to see how I'm doing. xD

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