Alois in Wonderland, Chapter II A Bitter Pool of Tears

[strawberie_laaa]

 And so Alois Trancy did dream of his Wonderland again, but to his utter despair he found that he was still nine feet too big to enter that lovely garden.

“What’s this?” He cried, trembling all over from the cold, “why am I still in this shape? Is this not a dream, my dream?! Should I not be in command of this wretched state?!!!”

Comments

[skullster]

Defiantly a late comment, but my first attempt failed, it seemed. x'D

Once again, I simply love it. <3 Oh, I can feel such disappointment at the end of it on Alois' part. Just like Claude to drag him in a little, ultimately teasing him, unintentionally. I'm still over here, wondering whether this might turn out to be a cruel ending to this fairy tale, or it might even turn to a happier note.

~♥~♥~♥

[strawberie_laaa]

Ohh! I just love reading your reviews! They're always so nice and encouraging! Should I spoil the ending for you since you're so anxious? ^^;

Re: ~♥~♥~♥

[skullster]

I'm happy that I'm not discouraging. xD <3 Oh goodness, the decisions! I think I'll bare with not knowing; it's half the fun, after all. Whatever comes, be it heart-lifting or heartbreaking, I'm sure that I will enjoy it. <3

Re: ~♥~♥~♥

[strawberie_laaa]

Awww! Whie wouldja be discouraging? You're like my only reviewer and you make me so happy!♥ And ok, I won't spoil 'nothin for ya :3