*blinks* Ahh...xD I'm not entirely sure this is the kind of story I'm into, but...well done, really. Such a serious, uncommon topic. I dig the originality a lot, so I'm overlooking my aversion to OOCness. xD
The beginning was really vague in the way of who was speaking...I'm guessing that was to keep us from knowing if it was Yugi or Yami who was the run away? It was kind of confusing though, which took me out of the story since I really had no idea what was going on at times.
I loved the last third or so though, once the story started coming together. That was great, very powerful.
...I kinda have a thing for angsty/weepy Yami, so...yeah I liked those parts probably more than I ought to have. ._.
This isn't either, but the plotbunny was insistent...when I was studying, of all things. ._. I warned people, "all things strange and unheard of from me (so far)"!
Actually, I thought it would be pretty obvious that it was written from 'Atemu's' POV in the first section, by the end of the story? The whole thing was actually his biased account, haha.
GO ANGSTY!YAMI. It's so totally in his character to be like this, blah. D: He's better off being weepy like this rather than macho man.
Glad you stuck until the end of the story though. <3 It means a lot to me~
hsdgjksa IS IT STILL INCEST IF THEY'RE JUST HALF-BROTHERS? Or is it half-incest? XPP
Uke!Yami is one of those rare treats you sometimes find in the fanfic world. This one's definitely a winner. I've read many AUs before, but I haven't come across this one yet, until now. Where'd you think up of the topic, pray tell?
it's a good thing that our classes are on vacation now, otherwise I wouldn't be able to concentrate from reading all your fics. XD;;
Implied incest? 8D Iunno, I think they're blood-related to some degree so yes, it's still...incest... .___.; You're probably the only one on my f-list who's as excited about incest as me. XD
Um, I was reading too many yaoi manga by Minase-sensei? ^_^;; When I should've been studying for my finals, which I have one this afternoon, LA LA LA~
Augh, I know this one was ultra long. And I wrote this when I was studying too, lolwtfbbq. T_T;
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The beginning was really vague in the way of who was speaking...I'm guessing that was to keep us from knowing if it was Yugi or Yami who was the run away? It was kind of confusing though, which took me out of the story since I really had no idea what was going on at times.
I loved the last third or so though, once the story started coming together. That was great, very powerful.
...I kinda have a thing for angsty/weepy Yami, so...yeah I liked those parts probably more than I ought to have. ._.
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Actually, I thought it would be pretty obvious that it was written from 'Atemu's' POV in the first section, by the end of the story? The whole thing was actually his biased account, haha.
GO ANGSTY!YAMI. It's so totally in his character to be like this, blah. D: He's better off being weepy like this rather than macho man.
Glad you stuck until the end of the story though. <3 It means a lot to me~
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A different twist on the story, and definitely not what I was expecting, but very satisfying and well done! Good job! ♥
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But haha, yay, glad you enjoyed~ xD <3
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Uke!Yami is one of those rare treats you sometimes find in the fanfic world. This one's definitely a winner. I've read many AUs before, but I haven't come across this one yet, until now. Where'd you think up of the topic, pray tell?
it's a good thing that our classes are on vacation now, otherwise I wouldn't be able to concentrate from reading all your fics. XD;;
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Um, I was reading too many yaoi manga by Minase-sensei? ^_^;; When I should've been studying for my finals, which I have one this afternoon, LA LA LA~
Augh, I know this one was ultra long. And I wrote this when I was studying too, lolwtfbbq. T_T;
Thanks for the comment~ <3
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