Whoa...you know, I think this just became one of my favorites out of all the themes so far. LOVE IT. <3
I like the way you presented Yami's thoughts here. Kind of simple, straight-forward, no floweryness. It's realistic, and that makes the emotional punch all the more heavy to me.
I...I have nothing else to say in the face of superior writing. ;~;
WHAT SUPERIOR WRITING :< :< :< I don't like how you keep doing that to my ego me, it makes me feel bad. ;_;
But one of your favourites?! I'm glad you like it, this was something written on the spur of the moment and it wasn't something I mulled over for a long time (like some of the upcoming themes)...
I wrote it in a style that would represent Yami's personality, I'm glad it also carried out well! My personal favourite out of this theme is the opening line. lol science /shot
Thank you so much Cheyyyyy. ;_; I NEED TO GET BACK IN TOUCH WITH YUUGIOU (and everything else) I feel so secluded from my fandoms. /bawls
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I like the way you presented Yami's thoughts here. Kind of simple, straight-forward, no floweryness. It's realistic, and that makes the emotional punch all the more heavy to me.
I...I have nothing else to say in the face of superior writing. ;~;
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But one of your favourites?! I'm glad you like it, this was something written on the spur of the moment and it wasn't something I mulled over for a long time (like some of the upcoming themes)...
I wrote it in a style that would represent Yami's personality, I'm glad it also carried out well! My personal favourite out of this theme is the opening line. lol science /shot
Thank you so much Cheyyyyy. ;_; I NEED TO GET BACK IN TOUCH WITH YUUGIOU (and everything else) I feel so secluded from my fandoms. /bawls
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