QR / Chapter 19 - Cover Me

Aug 05, 2007 15:56

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 19 - Cover Me
Author: street scribbles
Rating: R
Summary: Hermione does what she does best - questions everything. Draco is around with some of the answers, but less than they both realize when more things to be questioned suddenly erupt.
A/N: I have no words. I know it's been forever (forever), and I thought ( Read more... )

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ohmemory August 6 2007, 11:59:23 UTC
shajkdshajk!!

i'm really glad you updated, i ADORE this fic of yours. :)

the chapter? was amazing. it's been a while since i read some good ol' d/hr interaction that made go "bahh!" at their bickering but still feel oh so warm and fuzzy inside, so kudos to you for that.

i'm so glad hermione suddenly remembered their original plan of getting harry back instead of getting too caught up in her relationship with draco. hermione's friendship with harry and ron kills me. and people being able to see draco!

i need. to. know. how. NOWWWW.

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streetscribbles August 7 2007, 00:08:25 UTC
Aww, hi! I'm really glad you commented because I ADORE comments of yours. :)

Thanks for all the great things you had to say about their interaction! I actually love writing dialogue the best, so much gratitude for that, that people are actually enjoying it. And I'm glad you're glad about how Hermione's feeling in terms of Draco vs Harry, not as people, but what they represent, I guess. It is super important.

I know, MAD trio love huh? Esp in the last book. ♥

Thank you again! I'm gonna try to write really soon. :)

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bluebear_74 August 6 2007, 12:21:24 UTC
ZOMG Can it be? You've updated?!

I had to do a bit of a double take when I saw you updated, I read it on my phone in my lecture lol. Much more interesting to what my lecturer was babbling on about.

YAY Some Dramione lovin'. I really do hope they find away to "bring" Draco back, should get very interesting now people are starting to see Draco. DAMNIT Why do they need Neville?!?!?! Tell me you evil cliff hanger... giverer...

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streetscribbles August 7 2007, 00:19:39 UTC
Ahaha, YES! I finally have. :) And that's cute about how you read it on your phone. I'd be doing the same thing in class, lol.

Thank you for commenting on this! I really enjoyed hearing your thoughts and reactions. ;P And Neville, we'll, we'll just see. Promise I won't take a year. And it's sad because that's the best promise I can make. But I'm working on it! Reader's reactions always do get me going. :)

Thank you again, LiYan!

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bisai_kihaku August 6 2007, 22:47:31 UTC
Holy crap you updated!! I did a double take and then shrieked "YES!" when I saw this on my Friend's Page.

It's been a while hasn't it? I still love this story and I'm so glad you haven't abandoned it. That always seems to happen and it makes me so sad... Very gifted writers just walk away from amazing stories... But you didn't, so it's ok!

Characterization is still great. Also, this use of the 5 Stages of Grief is very interesting. I find it rather funny that Neville is once again somehow important. He's always that way isn't he? He just stands there in the background until someone says, "OMG! Neville!!" and then he does something important. (He was amazing in Deathly Hallows wasn't he?)

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streetscribbles August 7 2007, 01:54:46 UTC
Hi hi, thanks a lot for commenting on this! It feels good to know I still have people reading this. :) And yeah, I was gonna use mention the stages of grief thing in the beginning, but then I was like, why not carry it throughout the whole chap?

Thanks also for all the sweet things you had to say! I know what you mean when you talk about writers walking away from their stories, I hate when that happens. And, dude, yes, Neville is amazing! He's never let me down once in the whole series, and usually all characters eff up at one point or another, but he started out amazing and ended up amazing. :)

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freyza August 7 2007, 07:45:16 UTC
I'll have you know that I saw this update maybe an hour after you posted, but I had an early day at work so I went to bed instead, wishing I had the energy to read the chapter. Instead, I read the fic from beginning to end at work (hehe) so I could refresh all the details of the story. And then I came home and read it ALL OVER AGAIN so that I could write a review worthy of this freaking spectacular update.Man, am I glad that I read the fic over again. Especially this chapter. Knowing what was going to happen in this chapter, I saw little hints that this was the direction you were heading in. Like, HOLY COW I must have been so blind to see how many times I missed the words "cold" and "warm(th)" that were subtly woven into the text. Way to go. Haha. Though I'll admit I'm a little disturbed to see how Hermione keeps feeling cold now ( ... )

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freyza August 7 2007, 07:48:28 UTC
Oh, and I have an even EARLIER day at work tomorrow--er, today, I guess. But I'm up writing a totally incoherent review for you because I had the ever-consuming desire to inflate your ego. =) HAHA.

♥!!!!

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streetscribbles August 7 2007, 10:36:49 UTC
FREYA!! :) How are you? What's your job? Anyway, THANK YOU! I'm so astounded that people actually went back to reread the whole thing. I assumed most people would've just lost interest, actually, which I know is really negative, but, anyway, yes.

I must have been so blind to see how many times I missed the words "cold" and "warm(th)"
Ahh! I'm so glad you finally did catch it, though! :) And it's totally not just you. Even I forget about how I did that. I forget so many things about my own fic, haha. Which reminds me, did you notice any inconsistencies? Hopefully not.

But thank you for all the amazing things you had to say! You have me all flushed here. ;) Sometimes I feel like I have no idea what I'm doing, but when it's affirmed that I might be doing something that does make sense, then that feels really good. Thank you again. :)

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hot_nix12 August 7 2007, 14:50:24 UTC
i love you! i love you! i love you!!! I love you for updating! :D

honestly, i was losing hope but i still kept checking for updates.. and then.. wow. what a nice surprise! :D thank you! thank you! thank you! hahaha (im so excited! can't you tell?!) ;p

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streetscribbles August 8 2007, 09:17:07 UTC
Haha, thank you for all the love! And I'm glad you didn't lose all hope. :) Major apologies for taking forever, I know the last chapter was like, seriously almost a year ago and that's totally shameful - but I'm glad you liked the surprise! :D Thanks again!

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