QR / Chapter 19 - Cover Me

[streetscribbles]

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 19 - Cover Me
Author: street scribbles
Rating: R
Summary: Hermione does what she does best - questions everything. Draco is around with some of the answers, but less than they both realize when more things to be questioned suddenly erupt.
A/N: I have no words. I know it's been forever (forever), and I thought

Comments

[likegrass]

iiiiiiiiiii♥ loved it, LOVED IT. never been good at reviewing, but i just had to let you know that i finally read this chapter and can't wait for more!

ilovedraco.

[streetscribbles]

Oh, Laura! Thank you so much! It always feels so great to see a longtime reader return, so I know you're still around and that's GREAT! Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. :) ♥

[fireflys_locket]

I can't even describe the emotions that hit me when the First Year talked to him. And the way that I saw Hermione whip around at the sound. Yes, saw. And for the first time, it made me really appreciate how wonderful it is to be able to see like this again. I only briefly mentioned before, and it probably doesn't matter... but for so long words were just words, and I couldn't see things in my head properly. And it was a gradual gaining back... but suddenly it just hit me, strongly. Like what was happening right then in the story. Draco being... real. To someone other than Hermione or Ron; to a normal person. Like a slap in the face, a punch in the stomach...

But one you really needed.

And I probably sound silly, so I'll just move on. Next chapter, I'll be caught up, I believe? I suppose I'll see.

[streetscribbles]

I was pretty much floored when I read this comment of yours. I love all comments that focus on how great people think my story are - obviously. ;) But when it goes beyond the realm of just an entertaining read and changes people's perspective or helps them with a random aspect of life and the like, then I'm just really proud, and happy. Thank you. :)

[fireflys_locket]

Oh, I glad it didn't seem silly. It just affected me so much that I had to say something. I would have wanted someone to tell me... and to add to it, I also did some writing after I finished reading. Which I haven't done in a few months. ^_^ So thank YOU.

[pardonthelitany]

hello.

so. this is a really amazing chapter. and i'm not just saying that. because it really really is. you're omniscient narration (is that what you would call it, it's sort of a detached commentary...) is quite incredible, i love the descriptions of grief and change. they're truly beautiful, and very well done.

and i have a lot to comment on, but i'm going to try to do it quickly, because i am terrible excited for the next chapter (squee!) :D

A lot of the time this scared Hermione, because she thought Draco had died. She sometimes forgot that he was already dead. okay, something about hermione in this chapter is definitely off. i feel her listlessness, her sorrow, and her inability to find reality. i totally get the way that she cant see what's real and not, and the way you've written everything in such an abstract way makes me just... understand her hysteria. and i'm doing a shit job of explaining myself- but i think what i'm trying to say is that you do a brilliant job of making me feel with her, which is quite wonderful.

[streetscribbles]

Love to YOU. You seem to be one of the very few people who REALLY get what I'm trying to say, which I love you for. Namely Hermione's listlessness - we've all been there, right? FUCK that feeling. But still, the truth of the matter is, while it sucks - we all still have to experience it.

I wasn't sure how well the stages of grief thing would play out, namely because I know a lot of people think it's bullshit, and sometimes I do too, but other times . . . I just get in one of my weird moods and like to toy with the idea.

Basically I love you for everything that you already know. You just GET this story and this story loves you! :)

[pardonthelitany]

well, i love this story too!!

and i know that you probably felt a bit of trepidation over this chapter, but it's incredible. you're still amazing, daaahling. <3

OMG and CHECK OUT MY ADORABLE HALOWEEN ICON!!

oh whoa

[anonymous]

(I forgot my LJ account password. you made me forget it!)

ohh lorddyyy. This is so enchanting. I'm crying now.

this is way unbelievable...

I def. LOVE this story....

SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

Re: oh whoa

[streetscribbles]

Reveal yourself!

And, thank you. :)