Flash! Bam! Alakazam!

[strickenwings]

Title: Flash! Bam! Alakazam!
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brian/Matt
Summary: This one might be heaven-sent, Matt, so don't screw it up!
Disclaimer: The only thing here that is mine is the plot. I do not intend to besmirch any actual people, whom I also don't own. The title belongs to Nat King Cole from "Orange Colored Sky." The chapter title belongs to Van

Comments

[xxxemo_lyxxx]

I just read the last 3 chapters you posted...I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think I'm going to have to go on here a lot more often cause I can't wait for the next chapter! XD

[strickenwings]

Thank you very much!
xoxo

[not_my_memory]

wow

I don't even understand how it's possible to write like you're doing. THAT's how good you are at this!

"sorry if that wasn't hot enough"---?
If it'd have been any hotter I would've spontaneously combusted...is that what you want!!!
phew, I'm gonna go lie down now...

oh yeah,great update btw. I liked it in case it's not obvious;)
<3

[strickenwings]

Oh dear.

I'm not letting that one go to my head. -blush- That's very sweet of you!
xoxo

[zuzi82]

Holy crap.

Now that was hot.

I mean. You're such a good writer and all the stuff that comes with it, so I'll just pretend that the rest of the chapter was not there and was not as beautiful as it is (but the story is good ,and it would be even if there was no sex) but I need to focus on that first part. Amazing style, amazingly portrayed, the idea of the flashback is so fitting.

"At any other time he would've thought it was filthy and shameful. His inhibitions slipped through his fingers like a fist full of water as he buried his face right between Brian's legs and opened his mouth." <--this was probably one of the hottest and dirtiest sentences I've ever read.

and....

"Ride," Matt commanded. YES SIR YES! *salute*

[strickenwings]

It means a lot that you say that. I think this is the first time I've posted a sex scene, so I'm relieved that you guys liked it.

xoxo

[kerstee_lou]

I don't think I've commented on and of the previous chapters yet
I should have
Because I love you so damn much
And your writing is amazing
And I love this story
And yay for office sex :D

[strickenwings]

Wow, thank you! It's so nice of you to say that. <3

[strickenwings]

Glad this was just right. :]

<3