PoT: Calling

Jan 28, 2006 00:22

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka/Ryoma
Rating: PG13
Continuity: Manga, no spoilers
Notes: Nominally for pillarchallenge. This is really weird. Also it is a hell of a random spin off the challenge. I do that a lot. Nothing whatsoever to do with extraterrestrials, sadly.

Calling )

pot, pillarchallenge, tezuryo

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bookshop January 28 2006, 00:41:29 UTC
THIS IS FABULOUS. I KNOW I HAVE JUST REVIEWED IT AT YOU BUT!!!! It was such a great read and the emotional intensity and bewilderment and ryoma's confusion and palpable desire were just wonderful and exhilarating. Tezuka staying up all night worrying and being confounded by Ryoma = love, as does Fuji being Fuji and KARUPIN YAYYYY and the text from Nanjiroh and the. THE FUTON SHARING OH MY GOD.

beautiful ending. beautiful fic. beautiful job. ♥

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seii_ryu January 28 2006, 01:04:39 UTC
I thought this was going to be another angsting away fic so the last paragraph had me smiling like an idiot.

I swear, Fuji has a sixth sense when it comes to these things. XD And of course he'd be cheering them on, not trying to steal Tezuka away (not that he could). *glares at the TezuFuji's who've been acting up in class*

She always smiles too much at buchou, and it makes Ryoma's chest hurt.

I love how you mention Nanako as a live human being, and not some cooking android that the Echizens happen to have lying around.

Great story! This is definitely going into the memories.

Ryoma stretches his legs and lungs into the run,

Would it be lunges?

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flyby January 31 2006, 03:45:28 UTC
Ah, no, this one was meant to be lungs. ^^;

Hee. Fuji knows everything. And he wouldn't want to steal Tezuka away; Tezuka is interesting, because he's difficult to read, but not that kind of interesting. Not to Fuji.

Thank you for reviewing!

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weirdlyyours January 28 2006, 01:55:03 UTC
This is fantastic. Ryoma's raw emotion, Tezuka's confusion, and the way Fuji is all-knowing and pushes Ryoma in the right direction--wonderfully written and lovely and this is just so good. ♥

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flyby January 31 2006, 03:48:36 UTC
^_^ Thank you.

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soundczech January 28 2006, 03:01:42 UTC
It's two days before Ryoma recovers enough of his usual equanimity to call Tezuka again. He spends them wandering around the local sports shops and street courts, trying and failing to find an opponent whose play can hold his attention. Lack of tennis makes him irritable and jumpy, and when Tezuka tells him that he has a family engagement and cannot play tonight Ryoma almost hangs up on him.

I love Ryoma. This was great.

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2naonh3_cl2 January 29 2006, 05:43:14 UTC
i think i love your tezuka. i think i love your ryoma. i know i fucking love this fic. thank you so much for sharing.

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