PoT: Rituals

Mar 19, 2006 01:20

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka and Ryoma, pre-slash.
Rating: PG
Notes: Manga continuity, at the end of current canon year. No spoilers. I started writing this for pillarchallenge weeks ago, so definitely missed the boat on that one. -.-;

Rituals )

pot, tezuryo

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bookshop March 19 2006, 01:45:04 UTC
THERE IS SO MUCH LOVE IN THIS FIC I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN. YOU COULD GIVE ME A WEEK ANDFSDSAFLKSD I COULDN'T ASLKFJADS;LKJLKSJLK;FJLKAFS. GOD. CHIYA. THE THINGS YOU DO TO MY HEART.

THE PLURAL FORM HAS NEVER SEEMED SO SEXY, EVER. SATURDAYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. YES RYOMA. TEZUKA WILL PLAY YOU EVERY SATURDAY, FOREVER.

*_*

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flyby March 20 2006, 00:26:23 UTC
IT WILL BE THEIR REGULAR DATE AND RYOMA WILL IGNORE NANJIROH'S MOCKING BECAUSE HE CANNOT QUITE MAKE HIMSELF DENY THAT.

♥♥♥

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bookshop March 20 2006, 02:16:21 UTC

ksadljf;lsafjddkjfasj YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS PART OF THE RED THREADS FIC, CHIYA. RED THREADS! I WANT MORE RED THREADS! AND THIS! MORE OF EVERYTHING! GOD!

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flyby March 20 2006, 02:26:04 UTC
It does not fit in the red threads fic, but the other thing. The other thing that I have forgotten. Crap. But it does. I think. Oh! The tennis communication thing! CARRY ON.

I want more red threads :((

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wonapalei March 19 2006, 01:45:10 UTC
Right now the only thing I can think is that of course Tezuka's mochi would be purple. :D :D

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bookshop March 19 2006, 01:58:58 UTC

asdjkfljsd; it is GRAPE-FLAVORED. SUCH GLEE. because with all the staring of course Tezuka knows that Ryoma only drinks Grape Ponta. *_*

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wonapalei March 19 2006, 02:07:37 UTC
Can mochi actually be flavoured? I thought they were rice cakes, rather like the Japanese equivalent of Indian idlis. Shaped and coloured, I can see, but flavoured, especially with something sweet? Or am I completely mistaken? *is bewildered*

In any case, I totally missed the significance of the grapes! I was all caught up in the colour, instead of the Ponta reference. :D

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bookshop March 19 2006, 02:15:14 UTC

dlaskfjak;lsjd SPEAKING OF PURPLE. GOD. WHOSE CROTCH AM I LOOKING AT. *DIES DIES DIES*

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storyteller March 19 2006, 01:58:09 UTC
I love you and I love this fic. ♥♥♥ It's so perfect.

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flyby March 19 2006, 23:56:41 UTC
♥ Thank you.

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goruden_kombi March 19 2006, 02:00:02 UTC
This fic, it's so lovely. *_* I love their terse messages to each other; I just adore your portrayal of this pair.

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flyby March 19 2006, 23:57:29 UTC
Thank you very much ^_^

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weirdlyyours March 19 2006, 02:06:58 UTC
Ryoma fumbles at the paper with gloved fingers, not quite willing to rip it Of course he doesn't rip it. He'll preserve the lilac wrapping paper forever and carefully lay it in the box with the Seigaku photograph (where he drew hearts around Tezuka's face) and the very first ball Tezuka gave him.

Ryoma doodling tennis balls on thank you cards (I'm sure he doodled Karupin on some others) and nearly-smiling!Tezuka. I will never get over my delight at nearly-smiling!Tezuka, let alone Tezuka ACTUALLY SMILING AT RYOMA. ♥

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flyby March 20 2006, 00:06:24 UTC
Tezuka should smile more :(( Of course, this would require that he spend more time around Ryoma. So it is practically foreordained.

Thank you ^_^

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