PoT: fifteen-love

[striking_sparks]

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Tezuka/Ryoma
Rating: PG
Continuity: probably manga, no spoilers
Notes: for pillarchallenge. 1000 words, no idea why the second person, high school-ish again.

Comments

[chasingwhispers]

Aaaah wow oh... damn.

This is wonderful. To contradict the first comment (*blush* and no offence meant) I found this warming rather than chilling, despite the external descriptions of rain and cold skin- Tezuka and Ryoma make it hot. Brilliant stuff.

[spurious]

Oh god, this was beautiful. The way they spoke a game, and together you have no limits. Is so true of them and just perfect. The second person works really well, I think, too. It makes the whole fic feel a lot more intimate. I loved this.

[not_amy]

Every now and then I find a fic that literally takes my breath away, and this was one of them. The second person point of view was perfect and lovely.

♥

[ego_elite]

Ohh and ahhh and and omg yes!!!
Love the last line. <3 <3

[weirdlyyours]

"Don't take them off for anyone else, buchou." *shivers happily* Ryoma is so possessive and I love him for it. ♥ I adore the emotion in this, all the hesitance and sexual tension, and I think that 2nd person was just really well-suited for this piece.