PoT: drabbles

Jun 19, 2006 04:43

Drabbles for kessie. Pre-Tezuka/Ryoma, manga continuity, spoilers up to Genius 160/Hyoutei arc. All entirely worksafe.

the quiet of a storm approaching | Hyoutei arc, Genius 152 )

pot, tezuryo

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weirdlyyours June 19 2006, 04:25:57 UTC
Oh. Ow. The first three drabbles were all heartbreaking and post-Hyotei was probably one of the most painful times ever because gah. Tezuka. because this is buchou and he has told you that he will win. Oh Ryoma. I love his voice here, unwilling to accept that Tezuka would lose and leave--a little desperate. :(((

The last drabble was pure love. This pairing makes me so happy. ♥

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flyby June 20 2006, 01:23:24 UTC
♥ Thank you!

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kessie June 19 2006, 22:48:57 UTC
Okay. So. Am going to attempt actual coherency here. Go me!

First Drabble

Second person. Oh yes. ♥ I love this: Ryoma trying to convince himself that he has complete faith in Tezuka, even with tiny cracks appearing in this faith by the end of the drabble. I was all awwwing, while being to be sad because I knew what was going to happen. :( Wonderful beginning, even though I suspected you were going to break my heart along the way.

Second Drabble

There's a lovely sense of juztaposed opposites in this one, a definite sense of before and after. Ryoma having to watch the match helpless while remembering his own, and thinking Tezuka beautiful even while feeling sick. I felt like closing my eyes just to stop the ineveitable coming.

Third Drabble

And then you broke my heart. That's all I'm going to say. Why must you be so good at angst even when I hate it for this pairing? It makes me wibble and cry for this pairing. A definite contrast to my previous fandoms, where I used to throw everything angst and dark-ridden against the ( ... )

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flyby June 20 2006, 01:37:24 UTC


See, I'm not sure I actually see this as angst per se. It's more - it's in-canon, so the resolution is already there, if that makes sense. The happy ending is waiting down the line. I hate the kind of angsty ending where they don't end up together and happy, so I write it very very rarely. In fact I think once, and that universe has an unwritten ending in my head where they end up together again after all.

jdkslhfska fic for me? *bounces* Requests are still open, really, because I'm so not objecting to people throwing inspiration at me; I'm not writing much at the moment, and I need to get kickstarted somehow.

:)) and thank you for reminding me; I've had this icon sitting on my computer since I scanned the doujin.

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calann October 14 2007, 20:22:53 UTC
I have just read each and every one of your TezuRyo fics and would like to say that AKLSDLKTRJKBLÖHPOKÄÖGH so much love for them all ♥♥♥♥♥♥
They make me incoherent and wibbly and gooey and the one about Karupin made me want to cry and gah. Love.

I will probably rec most of them, once I get over the worst of the impulse to simply gush.

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