Neon Tokyo Cant Take Constructive Critisizm

[strings360]

So I posed what I thought of one of "the neon tokyos" lyrics that he posted, and he removed it probably cause he didnt want to be made to look like a fool, or mabye to save his ego in other people eyes .... Either way I am going to post what i said anyway

Comments

[sleepytown]

That was the worst/funniest shit I have ever read. I just about fell out of my chair laughing. You would think that him listening to The Police while writing the poem he would be inspired to write something with substance. It seems like a lot of people are mean to Nick about his poetry but honestly that poem is awful. I want to shit myself.

[sleepytown]

Where can I get a shit sandwich. Oh, right here.

[strings360]

Ya heehe Theivorytower should change her name to the ivorybitch

[sleepytown]

HAHAHA. IvoryBitch

[mango_organa]

hes a vogon