saints 'verse {part 02}

[strippedpink]

Title: Even Saints Make Their Mistakes

Comments

[electricalgwen]

That horrible, dawning, I-know-something-I-never-wanted-to-know realization, and then, “Oh, my god.”

I love your language and your descriptions all through this. The mingled stories and alternating POVs work really well. It just keeps getting better as they make more of a trainwreck of things...

[thepuppeteer]

Touching, well written and intriguing. Good stuff !! :)