Unbetaed as of yet. I'll clean it up some more before I crosspost...just wanted to get something out since I said I would. :D Also, you might wanna refresh your memory since the timeline's so screwy on this one...I've linked all the previous parts below for easy hunting access
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what! Kane
didn't expect that commin.
great update.:)
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This is the most delicious exercise in frustration, aching want, and tension. All of the emotions Jensen runs through are so masterfully crafted by your writing I can almost taste them, and they burst on my tongue like these intense, multi-flavored sensations. There's sweet, tangy, sour, heat, salty, bitter, spicy, and a million others I'll never be able to name but feel and taste all the same.
Then you drop this bomb! And to paraphrase Veronica Mars last night, as if my mind weren't blown already, it was put back together just to be blown again. I'm going to have to re-read to see how much of Chris we've seen before.
I love the way you've outlined this fic in a non-linear fashion. It allows me to read and revel in it in more than one way. I always try to re-read this verse when you post, and then I re-order the pieces and read them sequential order and it knits together like a beautiful quilt that I just want to wrap myself up in and get lost under.
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Yay for fratboy verse! Yay, yay, yay. I'm glad your muse came back and got with the writing.
Possessive!Jared is just fantastic. Poor Jensen, his emotions are running hot and cold. And Jared, I'm not sure he knows how to act either. By this was just wonderful! I just love your fratboy!Jared and pledge!Jensen! All I can do is just smile right now with absolute glee.
And then the end, with Chris being the other inside source... What is going to happen? How is Jensen going to play things with the knowledge that Chris is the president and an inside source? What circumstances have arisen that caused Jensen to have to get into the Sigs to get the information that Chris couldn't? Oh, so many wonderful questions.
I'm so freaking excited that you are continuing this. I can't wait to see where you go with this!!
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