SPN Harlequin: When the Dealin's Done, 2/2 [JP/JA, NC-17]

Aug 03, 2007 00:46

Title: When the Dealin’s Done.
Pairing: Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles, Lauren Graham, Chad Michael Murray
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 | alternate universe, graphic m/m slash, minor het, real person fiction, drama, romance. Harlequin, baby!
Word Count: 17,000
Summary: Life is all about sizzle for rising poker star Jared Padalecki. He's always on the ( Read more... )

fic: jared/jensen, fic_august, fic, fic: supernatural rps

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smeared_kohl August 3 2007, 15:53:59 UTC
I absolutely loved that, I think it is definitely one of my favorite things you've written. I mean I usually love it all but something about this one...it seemed so right when it came to their personalities. Anyways, LOVE!

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mcee August 3 2007, 16:28:45 UTC
*INARTICULATE FLAILING*

I know this isn't the point of the story at all, but it's us so I'll take a moment to flap around about HOT VIXEN LAUREN and Jared fucking her. Good goddamn INDEED. *flaps flaps*

Okay, um. There's a reason Harlequin novels are so addictive, yeah? I can't stand the characters but the formulas I *LOVE*, and seriously, this might've been the best challenge ever. Plus you made it about POKER, which makes it extra-hot (I have a thing; how many times have I watched Rounders/Maverick/any ol' lame movie about cards?).

But the schmoop took the cake. And the pacing and PLOTTING of it was really awesome too, which makes you made of win.

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lawchic04 August 3 2007, 17:12:14 UTC
All the schmoopy J2 love was such fun to read.

Thanks!

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deirdre_c August 3 2007, 17:31:23 UTC
It's absolutely fabulous, sweetheart, as I knew it would be. Straight flush, ace high! \o/

(also, YAY Chad! *g*)

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masae August 3 2007, 17:38:45 UTC
That was great!! I loved the little flashes of the past that Jared had. Also, the Chad/Jared dynamic was pretty good. I also liked your use of Lauren. I think not enough people use here in their fics.

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