Comments | strippedpink: why don't you do right {part three, nc-17, jared/jensen}

strippedpink

why don't you do right {part three, nc-17, jared/jensen}

Jan 25, 2009 21:58

fic: jared/jensen, fic_january, fic, fic: supernatural rps

Comments 61

alasse January 27 2009, 04:43:53 UTC

OH MY GOD. This was utterly and totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God. WOW. I loooooved the premise, how you took the Roger Rabbbit but made it totally, totally J2. LOVED the three POV's, how things slowly came together, and, god. The descriptions of everything, from Jensen singing to the angry!sex and the final confrontation... It was just SO intense! Your writing completely blew me away - from feeling wrecked over how wrecked Jared was, to worried, to crossing my fingers that everything would end up okay and that Jared and Jensen would come out of it alive and knowing how much they loved each other. AMAZING. Jesus. Just totally, totally amazing.

2sexyboys January 27 2009, 04:57:54 UTC

You clever little rabbit you :) So well done...Genius infact. Loved it.

bitterbird January 27 2009, 05:07:42 UTC

wow this is fantastic, loved the way you used the POV amd the set up and expostion, this was very very amazingly done, much love <3

leodragon1 January 27 2009, 05:30:16 UTC

You wrote NOIR!??

*cue fangirly squeeing*

I shouldn't have decided to take a peek at my lj at work. Now I'll have to wait until I get home before I can read this, and that's HOURS away.

*iz bouncy*

leodragon1 January 27 2009, 11:00:27 UTC

Love, love, LOVED this.

How awesome was this, taking Roger Rabbit and the cartoons aspect of it out and making it really serious. God, even though I knew Jensen wasn't the bad guy, I STILL had my doubts towards the end, because he wasn't telling everything. I love how you put Jared on Roger Rabbit's place, but it was more as a naive and lovestruck husband.

And Judge Dawn was absolutely chilling.

bookworn80 January 27 2009, 05:34:02 UTC

OOHHHHHHHH my God. It was just so awesome. The whole story is just really great, I couldn't stop reading and it really stayed pretty close to the movie. But just uhhhhh jensen as jessica rabbit man that is just awesome.