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Jun 23, 2005 23:38

I LOVE POETRY

if you have a good peom leave it in the comments

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rockitharder June 24 2005, 19:03:06 UTC
Now, I missed the times ( ... )

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ducttape_850 June 25 2005, 02:41:18 UTC
well here we go.... when the atom bomb goes off in your chest, the mushroom cloud will envelope your brain. the alarms will sound. but its to late. you let her in and now the devistation begins. youll fall forever, never at peace. your palms, those hands she held were immortal then, but theyre there. shes there, there she is with the sound of a smile on her lips. and you walked the miles to escape. but escape is a very strict thing and an explosion like you knows no boundries just the chase. so send that transmision, spread the radiation, take down more with you. find all the hollow men and eat heir skin. because this is how the world really ends....

i dont know if youd consider that a poem but its something i wrote a while ago.

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you wrote that strive2live June 25 2005, 14:37:31 UTC
dude that sweet. its definaltly clear, i like that. and now im gona have the line, "a mushroom cloud will envelope your brain" in my head. def sweet tho

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