xmfc fic!

Nov 04, 2011 17:07

rien de rien, Charles/OFC, Charles/Erik UST, ~1000 words
Erik walks in on Charles in a rather compromising situation.

With thanks to pearl_o for advising. Title from Edith Piaf, because I was listening to her at the time. Also "I regret nothing" didn't really seem appropriate.

rien de rien )

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mumblemutter November 4 2011, 21:28:37 UTC
I'm looking forward to the day when Charles sits Erik down and explains to him that yes, a promise is a promise, but then sometimes thoughts are just broadcast so loudly, it really can't be helped, my friend. Etc. etc.

*ahem*

This was really hot, hi.

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strobelighted November 4 2011, 21:51:16 UTC
Erik is kind of new to this whole telepathy thing, poor thing. He also doesn't realize yet that Charles can make himself (and whoever else he chooses) practically invisible, and yet Erik was able to see the whole thing. But that's a conversation for a later time.

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mumblemutter November 5 2011, 02:21:49 UTC
There is so much yet to learn for Erik. *squeezes his hand reassuringly*

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pearl_o November 4 2011, 23:01:53 UTC
YAY YOU ARE GREAT AND I LOVE THIS.

(your html is a little funky on the very last line, though)

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strobelighted November 4 2011, 23:15:51 UTC
:D! Not gonna lie, your entries + comments are like 100% of my inspiration for every fic I (want to) write.

(thank! fixed now!)

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citizenjess November 5 2011, 00:50:24 UTC
HOT. All of the best tropes - Charles going down on girls, Charles' red, red lips, Erik's jealousyyy manifesting as EVERYTHING METAL STARTS WOBBLING - are squeezed snugly in here. ♥

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strobelighted November 5 2011, 01:43:04 UTC
Thanks! I do love all of those tropes quite a bit. :D

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pineapplepeople November 6 2011, 10:21:47 UTC
Oh, wow. This is hot!

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strobelighted November 6 2011, 21:17:28 UTC
Thanks!

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joltyness November 7 2011, 03:32:55 UTC
This made me sad and aroused at the same time. Sad because Erik saw that whole ordeal and is unable to say what he really feels, aroused because... well.

Great little fic.

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strobelighted November 7 2011, 05:47:13 UTC
Erik eventually learns to deal with his ~feelings~ and he and Charles do their thing. But that's another story for another time. Anyway, I'm glad you liked this! :D

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