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underdebate August 22 2010, 03:21:53 UTC
but instead of thinking about his contacts and the reports he'll be keeping on Fischer's progress, he's thinking of restaurants that he can bring children to.

This was an absolutely perfect line to finish with. I haven't seen enough fic that uses the fact that Cobb does in fact have children-- and Arthur recognizing that and thinking about them having little dinner dates with Cobb's children coming along is just unbelievably sweet. God that made me smile. <3

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strokeof_genie August 25 2010, 03:51:36 UTC
OMG POCAHONTAS~ ♥ ♥

Oh man, I can't write the kids out of fic! Or, out of a fic that isn't a pwp. They are the entire reason the movie exists. That's like writing about Lincoln and not mentioning that a war happened during his presidency.

I'm so glad you liked it!

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rimestar August 22 2010, 06:03:05 UTC
My God, Arthur thinks, we're flirting.

I can get the most perfect mental image from this line alone. This whole fic is just amazing. This is a seamless fit into the movieverse and I love it. I love all your Arthur/Cobb. The little details you added into the fic make everything amazing.

I swear to god I want you to write the sequel to Inception. I'll go petition Chris this weekend.

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strokeof_genie August 25 2010, 03:53:01 UTC
I'm so happy you liked this! I'm still iffy on writing things that have ~plot, so this means a lot to me!

LOL my god I adore you

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strokeof_genie August 25 2010, 03:53:23 UTC
:D Thanks!

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yellowwolf5 August 22 2010, 10:51:22 UTC
aww, perfect! loved the last line!

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strokeof_genie August 25 2010, 03:53:41 UTC
:DDD Thanks so much!

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ckru August 22 2010, 13:43:15 UTC
It's so well-written and beautiful. *sighs* I love the way Cobb eased Arthur's mind and removed his insecurities. Your Arthur as a multilingual person is so in character and that little detail makes me love him a lot more. <3 The last line is kinda a cliff-hanger to me though since I feel like yearning for a sequel of their date now. XD

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strokeof_genie August 25 2010, 03:55:20 UTC
I can't imagine Arthur knowing just one language, you know? I feel like that would limit him, and he doesn't seem like a person who'd stand for that.

Hahaha, I kind of have an idea for a sequel (of sorts) but we'll see. :D Thanks for the lovely comment!

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