OMG, this was really cool and impressive. Not what happen, of course, is a really sad and tragic, but i really enjoy this story as general. Its really impressive and amazing, i never ever have read something like this before. Onew really creeps me out in this, haha, but i like really much. I feel really bad for Jonghyun and Minho too, but in general this was a amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing.
jesus CHRIST you're the best. At first I was totally in love with your style, and then when Onew was all "I'm a demon,' I got sort of skeptical as to if I should even continue BUT THEN I DID BECAUSE GAH YOUR WRITING IS REALLY GOOD and I'm so glad I continued reading. Great story. Great Ending. I love how everyone talked differently. How you differentiated from Taemin and Key, Minho and JongHyun and Onew, that sort of thing! Really well done! : ' D The beginning though is my favourite part. How you start with a single word and expand until you've covered every detail. Dammit. I love you.
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At first I was totally in love with your style,
and then when Onew was all "I'm a demon,' I got sort of skeptical as to if I should even continue
BUT THEN I DID BECAUSE
GAH YOUR WRITING IS REALLY GOOD
and I'm so glad I continued reading.
Great story. Great Ending.
I love how everyone talked differently. How you differentiated from Taemin and Key, Minho and JongHyun and Onew, that sort of thing! Really well done!
: ' D The beginning though is my favourite part. How you start with a single word and expand until you've covered every detail.
Dammit. I love you.
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