Damage Control (twins PG-13)

Jun 04, 2009 23:10

Title: Damage Control
Pairing(s): Bill/Tom
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: As real as some pictures.
Warnings: Twincest, angst, fluff
Summary: Suspicions are bad, fighting against them is hard. Same goes for insecurities.
Author's notes: Of course I would have a different view on the Chantelle thing. This story is for anyone to anyone who has ( Read more... )

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peki June 5 2009, 09:36:56 UTC
Aw, poor Bill, but in the end it turned out so sweet...what are you doing to me? Omg! *giggles* And I laughed at the “She looks older than twenty-one. American girls look older than they are.” bit. The whole dialogue was very enjoyable :)

B/T aside, I can see something much like this being the reasoning behind the whole flirting-with-labelmates thing. On the other hand, I have plans for Chantelle!fic too. Though now I feel sort of bad for what I´m going to do about her ;)

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strssna June 7 2009, 05:25:18 UTC
Indeed, what am I doing to you :D
Thank you so much dear for reading and reviewing, I'm very happy to hear you liked this, and as I know your preferences, I always feel extra special when you read my stories ♥

So, are you going to do something about her or to her? Either way, can't wait to read your view on this!

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peki June 7 2009, 09:24:32 UTC
Oh, I don´t think you´ll like my take on Chantelle/Tom *g* Hey, I´m a het writer on her honeymoon ;) But I assure you, I really do see the whole thing much like you (we agree, how surprising - not :)

I do enjoy reading your stories, and I´m so happy we´ve found so much common ground and get along so well that we can discuss any difference of opinion in an enjoyable manner. I think that´s great :)

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strssna June 7 2009, 12:27:39 UTC
Het writer on her honey moon would sound ike the scariest thing to have something written, but as it's you, it's actually very nice to hear the holiday is going.. well, in an inspiring way :) Are you guys back home yet, was it perfect?

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paraboobizarre June 7 2009, 18:47:04 UTC
Oh my Gawd, so beautiful! I LOVE LOVE LOVE Bill in this one, he's just so *at a lack for words* I love how jealous he is and how he wallows in self-pity, and that he's such a glutton for punishment, even looking up the pictures online.

Such an amazing little story *cuddles you to death*

You definitely need to write MOAR! Like now haha
<333

ETA: Sorry I commented so late but I only just had time to read your story, you know, family parties and all ;)

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strssna June 7 2009, 20:45:03 UTC
Nah, no worries, it's nice getting later reviews for a fic - that the compliments continue days after the first ones ;) Hope you had good parties!
Thanks for your lovely review, glad you liked this. I have a feeling that that is what Bill would do, torture himself and making it worse in his head, working himself up even though he'd know it was untrue to start with. But, feelings are such a curious thing, can't be reasoned.
After I finish my German course (tomorrow) and survive a five day festival trip, I'll just indulge in writing like whoa. Too bad it's the mpreg first in line, as it's not really your cup of tea, but there are so many bunnies hopping all over right now that I hope I can please you with something :)

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nekokaigara January 2 2010, 14:13:29 UTC
Ow! That stung! You write jealousy beautifully and the black candle(like the one in durch den monsoon, maybe?) was a nice touch. My heart smashed for Bill at the end though. And yeah, the whole Chantelle affair was obviously a PR thing

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strssna January 3 2010, 23:11:26 UTC
Sorry to hurt you :/ But as a writer it feels very good to hear the bad feelings came through the way I intended. 100% agree with you on the PR thing, lucky that's past us. Thank you for this very flattering review :)

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