Comments | strssna: Play time for I do's (twins PG-13)

strssna

Play time for I do's (twins PG-13)

Jun 23, 2009 23:54

Title: Play time for I do’s
Pairing(s): Bill/Tom
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Twincest, fluff explosion
Summary: Bill and Tom go on a holiday.
Author's notes: It’s the end of “Play time”! The series just sort of happened, it’s like my own fluff universe that is just supposed to be a place full of love and more love ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

steinsgrrl June 23 2009, 22:40:27 UTC

Oh honey, that was so sweet. What a wonderful surprise for Bill. I love the visual of the last scene and the last sentence is just love. Thank you for this. <333

strssna June 24 2009, 05:57:31 UTC

Tom tries to step up every once in a while :) He's such a softie for Bill. Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you thought that <3

rikke_leonhart June 24 2009, 07:40:33 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww ♥♥♥♥♥

strssna June 24 2009, 07:51:57 UTC

♥
Glad you felt that way.

subtlemagic June 24 2009, 15:31:32 UTC

*wibble*

*melts*

That was so adorable! I'm just going to go over here and be an incoherent pile of squeeks.

strssna June 25 2009, 15:27:57 UTC

Hehee, well that's a lovely reaction :) Have fun on your corner!

subtlemagic June 25 2009, 16:17:46 UTC

Indeed I will, my corner is a very fun place to be, you must join me for afternoon tea here one of these days.

strssna June 26 2009, 14:05:11 UTC

Well certainly, especially if there's cookies and cakes.

jellypencil June 24 2009, 17:05:16 UTC

AWWWW! ^-^ This is so sweet! Happy married boys. =3 I just love your humor, too. Tom is so sadly frigidity nervous, and Bill is so =?

"Sorry, my husband has a really bad memory, he’s so old.

<3333 Oh Bill! I loved that scene, too. Tom, you are not so convincing, really not. xD

Just loved this! <3

strssna June 25 2009, 15:25:22 UTC

Oh Jelly, you made me crazy happy with that comment &heartss;
I'm glad the boys managed to get married *swoons* despite their all their silliness. Their hearts are pure gold but sometimes it comes through a little rusted.

nekokaigara January 2 2010, 14:04:11 UTC

So cute! "Tom looked like he had just dodged a path of mines, and then tripped on his own baggy jeans." That's officially my favorite twincest line yet

strssna January 3 2010, 23:08:03 UTC

Whee, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) And you know, if he'd dodge a path of mines, figure out how to move graciously in his jeans, it'd only take a stretch of his brother's hot long legs to trap him.
In a sweet embrace, ahem.