Feast of Poetry

Jul 29, 2009 07:57

Today, I am sending out invitations for a feast of poetry! I have volunteered to cook one dish for each of you. All you have to do is ask ( Read more... )

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wyld_dandelyon July 30 2009, 00:44:44 UTC
dragons and dandelions and rainbows

something joyous and empowered

Oh, certainly I will link!

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for you... stryck August 3 2009, 13:43:23 UTC
Invaders

They tear the ground as green heads rise.
Their wings unfurl from private lairs.
They're washed by rain, and rainbow smiles
Shine on their hoards, of gold so fair.
Gold fades to white as the children are laid.
They bob and sway to the wind's caress.
More and more grow, until that day
They all take flight, new lands to possess.

Though they are by many abhorred
I love these dragons, and their hoards.

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minor_architect July 30 2009, 02:31:05 UTC
How about "observation serves inspiration?" Or "science of deduction?"

(Yes, I'm a Sherlock Holmes fan. So sue me. ;)

Free verse would be fine! Thank you!

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Speaking of Sherlock Holmes... stryck August 3 2009, 13:45:05 UTC
A rather rich epigramm-

As I examine facts for evaluation,
I find I know each motivation.
This point deserves elucidation,
Observation serves inspiration.

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minor_architect August 3 2009, 16:17:21 UTC
Yes! This certainly reads like something Holmes might have written. :D

Well done. Thank you!

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dakiwiboid July 30 2009, 04:03:47 UTC
Honey, regret, sandalwood. A sestina, maybe, or if that form's a PITA, what you will.

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stryck August 5 2009, 01:02:45 UTC
I made several attempts at a sestina, but I just couldn't get the leaven to rise. I hope that you enjoy your not-quite sonnet.

Luxuries

Bread is sweet when drizzled with honey
And sandalwood incense lends to the air
A delicious savor, perfumed with comfort.
Delightfully soft is the fur of a coney,
Like so many luxuries that I could wear.
Water over skin is a silken shirt.
I could bathe in warmth all day when it's sunny,
Drink honeysuckle and lavender from the air
Like wine, and thunderstorms for dessert.
Not all indulgences are purchased with money.
Some, like regret, are paid for with care
Diligently given to loss and hurt.
What price would you pay, what ransom give?
Your day to the past, or to the present, and live?

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moosl July 30 2009, 05:28:30 UTC
Ooh, what a tasty deal! Can you put this into a tanka?

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stryck August 5 2009, 01:04:13 UTC
I can certainly try!

Water back and forth,
A traveler held helpless
Between our two tides.
The voyager flies home with
The rush of joy from our hearts!

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moosl August 5 2009, 04:59:05 UTC
* applauds *

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stryck August 31 2009, 20:36:12 UTC
This was the previous one! Check my livejournal on Wednesday for the new one. :)

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