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[studiox54xcore]

I wake to light secretion atop my forehead. I clothe myself with comfort in mind. As I step outside my home I seem to recognize hair-splitting sounds and voices, phasing in and out, from near and far. While I try intentionally to gather enough, peace of mind if you will, to take one more step for fresh air, the voices seem to cease. All the while

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i love it!

[tauflamingo]

alright, so you already know i think thatthis is awesome...

SO

i would like you to go here : http://www.usatoday.com/life/gallery/2005/x3/flash.htm
and you will see that i am right about kelsey (frasier crane) playing THE BEAST on xmen3...hehe

[aqhart]

while i do enjoy your eagerness and willingness to write, i felt like this entry was a lot of talking that never really led anywhere. though the conclusion was nice, poetic, and all sorts of other pretty adjectives, i'm not sure what i was supposed to take out of it. the bulk of the time, i found myself being thrown from one metaphor to the next so quickly that i hardly had any time to understand what any of them truly meant. still, i'm a fan, and i hope you know this is all just constructive criticism. much love. -Alex. (meagan's bf from new year's)

[anonymous]

This is Aaron.
I read them both, and I think you should quit dicking around with monolouges and write a frickin play man! These rock!!! The eloquence of the language is unusual for a modern write, and usually throws a peice off balance. This, however, is brilliant. It is no small feat to write well and keep to a modern feel, all the while being strangely specific in meaning while leaving an underlying vagueness in the words. Maybe I'm reading into this too deep... No, not deep enough. These words are very specific to you, and that's why they seem vague to me... Saam, you really need to write a play. I'll help you man, even if I'm just moral support or motivation. Don't waste this talent.

[anonymous]

Aaron again. Do you have a xanga? It's what I use. Mine is www.xanga.com/ThespusLives. Leave a message there or get back to me in school when you can.