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Jan 20, 2007 23:50

So.. um. Not really sure what it is with them watching movies so much in this series.

Also, this is seriously the last part for a while. I know I keep saying that and then having another part up the next day, but I have two essays to write in the next week and finals to study for and there really, really needs to be focusing on my part if I'm ( Read more... )

consequences, drabbles, seto/mokuba, seto/yuugi, yuugi/mokuba

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immicolia January 21 2007, 12:06:21 UTC
Ha!

Mokuba is a clever, clever, boy. He knows excactly what he wants and what he needs to do to get it. ^^

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studyingstones2 January 21 2007, 22:14:45 UTC
XD So true.

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gothatheartholo January 21 2007, 15:56:01 UTC
XD go Mokuba!

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studyingstones2 January 21 2007, 22:14:59 UTC
*grins* Yeahrilly.

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yma2 January 21 2007, 16:07:46 UTC
Oh, I do so love Mokuba. For all his fucked-up-ness he's the least fucked up of them all.
Which is probably saying something.
And this was actually, in some strange way, the most hopeful part of the story yet. Things are coming together in what seems to be a nice way.
I think that it needs a bit more of an ending, either just one moer part of a slight change to the last line (which for some reason doesn't seem final enough to me) but having said that I do think this is damn near the climax and I don't think it should be dragged out much more.
This has been a wonderful series, highly enjoyable, very evocative with good characterisation and a stunning writing style. Thank you for putting it out here for our enjoyment!

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studyingstones2 January 21 2007, 22:20:58 UTC
Yeah... I think that actually probably says something really bad about exactly how fucked-up/disfunctional they all are.

And I think you're right about the last line. The thing is, since this is so close to the climax, I was trying to keep it from having too much finality about it.

And *beams* Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much. (Also, thank you so very much for taking the time to comment so often, you've been great encouragement.)

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lady_nuriko January 21 2007, 19:18:58 UTC
Haha! Leave it to Mokuba to be the one to take action! Love the "You're late" line. He probably had Yugi sitting on that couch the entire hour while he was waiting for Kaiba to show up.

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studyingstones2 January 21 2007, 22:22:39 UTC
XD Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if he'd planned on Kaiba coming home late. He knows his brother way too well...

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pandamanium January 21 2007, 19:36:07 UTC
Aw, yay, Mokie! ^^ He *would* be the one to fix things...

I love this; it's *so* sweet, and you've made me fall in love with Seto/Yuugi/Mokuba, lol.

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studyingstones2 January 21 2007, 22:23:55 UTC
XD Of course he would. Seto sure wasn't going to. *cackles*

And thank you! Yay for Seto/Yuugi/Mokuba love.

Your icon is teh ♥

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