So.. um. Not really sure what it is with them watching movies so much in this series.
Also, this is seriously the last part for a while. I know I keep saying that and then having another part up the next day, but I have two essays to write in the next week and finals to study for and there really, really needs to be focusing on my part if I'm
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Mokuba is a clever, clever, boy. He knows excactly what he wants and what he needs to do to get it. ^^
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Which is probably saying something.
And this was actually, in some strange way, the most hopeful part of the story yet. Things are coming together in what seems to be a nice way.
I think that it needs a bit more of an ending, either just one moer part of a slight change to the last line (which for some reason doesn't seem final enough to me) but having said that I do think this is damn near the climax and I don't think it should be dragged out much more.
This has been a wonderful series, highly enjoyable, very evocative with good characterisation and a stunning writing style. Thank you for putting it out here for our enjoyment!
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And I think you're right about the last line. The thing is, since this is so close to the climax, I was trying to keep it from having too much finality about it.
And *beams* Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much. (Also, thank you so very much for taking the time to comment so often, you've been great encouragement.)
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I love this; it's *so* sweet, and you've made me fall in love with Seto/Yuugi/Mokuba, lol.
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And thank you! Yay for Seto/Yuugi/Mokuba love.
Your icon is teh ♥
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