inspired by Thomas

Jun 16, 2006 14:44

Do you remember the Bud Haiku promotion 5-7-5? Below are some of my submissions that they rejected.

I can't figure out why?!

No teeth and a glass
eye.Ten budweisers later,
She looks like Kate Moss

thirteen years old
she opens my Bud with her teeth,
Tijuana brothel

Splash, foam of beer
Steak and green beans, stink of bile
On the bathroom floor

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pornotron June 16 2006, 22:31:37 UTC
"she opens my Bud with her teeth"

that was beautiful!
I can't figure out why, either.

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