Apple of my Eye, part 3

[stupeur]

Title: Apple of my Eye (3/6)
Author: stupeur
Editor: cranperryjuice
Rating: R
Pairing: Tatsurou (MUCC) x Shiina Ringo
Summary: Despite his fame as a visual artist in 1960s Tokyo, Tatsurou has a strong dislike of circles and events, but caves in to his friend Miya and follows him to a private party in a jazz lounge. There he meets the beautiful and elusive Ringo, a

Comments

[wawachan]

I really like it. So far i didn't read that much fanfiction. Either in German or English. But there have been a few. Some of them where quite great and ended at a certain point to not let the story look like it was just about letting the characters have sex. There were some that touched the issue or discribed it well. Mostly there have been those fanfiction i already mentioned and sometimes it annoyed me, cause even the story was just leading to it or not written well

[stupeur]

Arg, sorry for the late reply! The last few days were kind of hectic. @_@

Anyway, thank you for your comment <3 It made me really happy to read it! I kind of lacked self-confidence about writing an erotic scene, for pretty much the reasons you wrote. It's so easy to fall into distasteful or gratuitous sex and I was really scared of that. Then again, I felt that due to the story having such a big emphasis no sensuality, it kind of needed such a scene (like, it would have been very disappointing if it didn't XD). So I'm really happy if I found just the right balance.

In short, your comment totally made my day! I hope I'll be able to update soon, I'm kind of really busy/tired/uninspired and my beta's computer broke so that slows things even more.