Somewhere In The Between

[stupid2freak]

         The slight breeze ruffled his straight, dark brown hair. The sky had started turning a steel gray as the sun was lost from sight. The snow had melted, but the chill of winter was still in the air.
         Zachary shivered slightly.
         His long brown coat swayed in the breeze and his converse high-tops made a small squeaking noise as

Comments

[pallidform]

that last line gave me chills... good job!

[tbone_bob]

highland coffee will never be the same for zachary...ha...just kidding cool story

[mem1019]

DAMN!
good job sara!! holy shits yes.
i think the best title that alludes to the ending.

maybe like the "the temporary nature of being"
or "last chance taken"
or "an abrupt ending in a small cafe"
or something shorter like
"taken"
or
"inevitability"

or like
"love's beginning at life's end"
"coffee shop tragedy"

that's what i got!

love,
maureen

[pallidform]

"love's beginning at life's end"
I like that one