a song in the works...

[stupidphuck]

burn up tetrahydrocannabinol, don't matter at all

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[rrageq]

wiggin'. i liked that stuff. it's a lot to digest, but what i suggest:

it's called "wack" - and I can't touch that
i'd fall (back?) flat...

direct incisions to reflect (my? instead of the) visions...

but i ain't no rapper and i haven't heard it with a beat so i might have the wrong "flow" to it (i dunno what you call it).

[stupidphuck]

i like it kinda because it is Wu-Tang-ish

i said "can't catch all that" because it rhymed better with "it's called wack"

the fall back works just as well as flat, and though they both rhyme, i think yours is a bit better, thank you :)

i said "the visions" because i was referring to visions in a general sense... why rappers (that are good) try to continue improving
oh yeah, and 'the' flows better than 'my' in context

thanks for actually bothering to read it, though

:D

[midnightblueluv]

ok talk to me here...

So yah I'll be at the Fairview inn

Cass

[stupidphuck]

oh... well, um, i already said everything over in the other one, lol

so where is this inn of fairview?

do you have a cell?

and when you go to utsa we have to hang out. of course. ;)

[midnightblueluv]

ok yah I have a cell

956-534-2247

lol....i have no idea where it is...let me see

Now I understand...i got the name wrong.
Fairfield Inn...lol
620 S Santa Rosa Ave

[stupidphuck]

coolio...

and you will be contacted

:)

fairfield inn, oh ok... i'll have to see where that is, lol

thank you! <3

[jamese15]

interesting i am sure it would make more sense to me if you explained it lol but what i did understand was pretty good. keep it up