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[stupidphuck]

GO TO SLEEP

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[autumnsea]

Spoken like an insomniac. :)

Something about these two lines I really like:

Throw it all away in your dreams.
In reality don't, she'd rather be hoped.

I think you meant 'to sleep less' instead of 'too', yes? I edit as I read along. I'm sorry if you did mean 'too'.

[stupidphuck]

I added a little extra near the end. Thanks for responding so quickly.

And I did mean 'too', heh heh.

"Too sleepless to keep messing up" is what I originally meant, but I like when it can mean two different things.

[restlessleep]

i liked it.. i haven't seen any of your songs/poems in quite a while
i think this happened to me a few days ago... with minor changes

[stupidphuck]

thanks. i haven't done poetry in a while, lol. but i suddenly got very into it again.

explain that second part. lol

[autumnsea]

Hello :)

I'm deleting my haiku community that you belong to. I have created a new haiku community where I hope to manage membership numbers better. If you're interested, it's haiku_4_2.

Thanks,
Suzy.

[stupidphuck]

Hey!

Yeah, I'd like to be in the community for sure - thanks for being so considerate. :)