the problem with fiction (05/10ish)

Jun 04, 2012 21:27

kris/chanyeol | PG-13
summary: that's right, this is your usual idol oppa/average high school boy fake engagement story. unless you never read one. you know, you should click the link.

author notes: ± 5, 984 words. wad up.

o n e / t w o / t h r e e / f o u r / interlude

it’s a jongdae who’s not here versus kris who probably only touches him because of the contract battle )

#master-to the-list, #kpop slash

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panic18 June 4 2012, 20:55:21 UTC
CRYING AND OMFG CRYING
kris raises an eyebrow but carelessly focuses back to the movie, pulling at chanyeol’s arm so chanyeol is snuggled back to his chest.
THIS
OMFG
CUTE
AWESOME
CUTE
OMFG

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 10:43:19 UTC
i like it that you cry. yes. thank you for crying. trololoolololololololol.
see you soon dude.

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tiggie0307 June 4 2012, 21:06:31 UTC
*Blinks* As of right now, nothing seems off. It's great and I love that Kris is in the lead in Chanyeol's emotion but for some reason because I am reading at work I skipped the second half of Kris talk with his parents about sending something to Chanyeol after he approves the friend request. That is just me being lazy.

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 11:10:04 UTC
troolololoolloololol i knew it. kinda cliche and shit right. ahoy.
but i meant, i was kinda afraid you readers will find...some off-ness from my style in this chapter, since the last time i updated was ages ago. dun want to ruin the vibe you know dude?

thanks for dropping your thought dude. see ya soon.

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tiggie0307 June 5 2012, 13:49:34 UTC
No no no, lol. I was just being lazy so I kinda zoom through reading, only that part but I got what was going on. Chanyeol and Kris have been very consistent so no worries. You are doing a great job.

And at least you update us on yourself. Unlike others who drop off the face of the earth for half a year only to come back and delete their lj pages. Don't fall off the face of the earth for half a year, only to come back and delte your lj page. Just saying :)

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 14:18:42 UTC
he he it's cool dude ahem. thank you so much.

wait what there are actually people doing that? ugh. maybe either their fandoms or LJs are too tiring yeah?
thank you for telling me this. man that's kinda scary.

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 11:13:06 UTC
trooollolooloololol you saved a spot yet troolololololol you hit the add a new comment button. not that i'm complaining dude troollolololol.

i don't feel like there were any big developments but this is necessary to see how chanyeol's mind is accepting kris right?

... )

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stroplok June 4 2012, 21:52:54 UTC
everything is krisyeol and nothing hurts

can't wait for more

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 10:44:01 UTC
awesome. krisyeol FTW. see you soon and thanks for reading.

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theblobmaster June 4 2012, 21:55:41 UTC
I would love to help but I know next to nothing about the EXO guys so I can't really help

But I really like the way you write and how you make them interact. I enjoy reading this fic a lot and the way the flow goes ^^

Keep it up! I hope there's someone who can actually help XD

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stupidrhapsody June 5 2012, 11:08:18 UTC
meh, no sweat dude. i am just kinda worried that you all gonna find weirdness shit from this chapter; like maybe i lost my 'style' from the previous chapters. he he.
so yeah thank you for dropping a comment dude. see you soon.

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