the problem with fiction - six (part one)

[stupidrhapsody]

kris/chanyeol | PG-13
summary: that's right, this is your usual idol oppa/ordinary high school boy fake engagement story. unless you never read one. you know, you should click the link.

o n e / t w o / t h r e e / f o u r / interlude / f i v e

Comments

[prek_drugz]

when that whole bathroom thing with sekai was going on
then chanyeol had kris thoughts
i scrolled up really quick to look at the rating again
( 　ﾟ,_ゝﾟ)
omg yey doodles are here \o/

just a breath away from kris’ lips.

[prek_drugz]

shit wait am i first comment oops

[stupidrhapsody]

the window gif. totally saving.

when that whole bathroom thing with sekai was going on
then chanyeol had kris thoughts
i scrolled up really quick to look at the rating again
what is this. everyone is so. what. can't guarantee you all will live when the actual TPWF smut happens. yes imma be smug.

and yes, my friend, my drugz, you be first. yes. let me share a mini size snickers witch you. thanks a lot for commenting, trloloolollololololololo.

[vindicatexo]

SPOT.
OH MY GOD FUCKING SPOT YOU FINALLY UPDATED IT DIJFNVIFVIUFVDHSIFU BRB READING AND FLAILING LIKE CRAZY

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[vindicatexo]

oh wow this comment is so fucking late ugh *shoots self*

sekai fucking in the bathroom with chanyeol listening...oMFG I CANT

Kris dropping channie off at school and then people glare at him but kris is his ultimate protector so no one can lay a finger dfjivdoifjsiovjdifjiuvdivivufivhifuv why so fluffy omfg

this reminds me so much of boys over flowers lol, but. BETTER. SO MUCH BETTER. UGH KRIS AND CHANYEOL. WHY

CANT FORM PROPER WORDS RN

but one thing is confused about...isn't luhan chanyeols tutor or smthing in the previous chapters? and then hes a producer...wait whut o_____O

idek what im saying maybe im just really stupid because i keep rereading the first two chapters and fangirling so hard that i forgot what happened in the rest but no matter since your writing is so flawless i shall go read everything again @____@

[aluzjonistka]

seriously, I squealed when I saw that you updated another part. what this story is doing to me. what this perfect kris is doing to me. what this perfect chanyeol is doing to me. and creepy luhan. and sekai. all the perfection. I feel like flipping tables. this is too good.

[stupidrhapsody]

dude dude dude new username. it's always awesome to see a new username commenting. what is this krisyeol doing to us. i know dude i know. dammit and creepy lu han is a must. sekai = nepotism. thank you for being here so muchos dude.

[aluzjonistka]

yeah i finally overcame my fear of writing comments so i'll try to comment every chapter from now on ;3 krisyeol is too much. my feelings are broken because of them. (but should i consider myself a masochist since i'm enjoying the pain they're giving me.)
the world needs more creepy luhan. definitely. i'd like to see xiumin-luhan interactions. creepy deer at his highest point.

and no no it's pleasure being here, thank you for writing amazing pieces of art. it's like, one of the best exo fics i've read. and the best ongoing. and characterization of kris and channie and tao and everyone is pure awesome. and now i want to flail about every little thing that makes this fic awesome, like, ryeowook and his 'chanyeolla', kris being jealous, and the past and present tenses thing and baekhyun and his twitter. and kris unbuckling chanyeol's seatbelt. tao's fear of fishes. all the perfect things. *reading again because there's never too much krisyeol*

[stupidrhapsody]

krisyeol is too much. my feelings are broken because of them. (but should i consider myself a masochist since i'm enjoying the pain they're giving me.)

[maki_roll]

CHANYEOL.
STUCK IN SUCH AN AWFUL SITUATION.
4 months with Krease left and then Jongdae with his clandestine affairs. LMFAO

I dunno how or why I can easily connect with Chanyeol. OTL
His feelings just hit meh.
Maybe it's cause we have the same personality.
and the fact that this is awesome.

OAO

<3

and watwat awkward bathroom experience. XDDDDD

SOB. *drags other people with me to give a thousand thumbs up*

[stupidrhapsody]

clandestine. i like that word because pete wentz.

I dunno how or why I can easily connect with Chanyeol. OTL
His feelings just hit meh.
ole. what is this. thank you for telling me. feel so accomplished somehow. whoa. thank you. that means my chanyeol here is not...2D, right? that you can relate to him. crying so hard.

also,
*drags other people with me to give a thousand thumbs up*
mother of hen. probably another sweet shit people have done to me. thank you so much.

[mina_shine]

I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU DUUUUUDE ♥

Oh my goooosh, me and my ovaries~ hehe

Yeah, I think I was preeeety much into this stuff, my dear! OMO KRIS IS JUST SOOOO JEALOUS! OH I loved these parts! And they're all oh so subtle but with Kris out man of not-so-many-words his behavior is just SCREAMING of jealousy.

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“whatever. so, no question? are you sure?” kris nods in behalf of chanyeol, and so lu han-hyung, honest to god, leers as he claps his hands and announces that he can’t wait to work with chanyeol, my chan chan, and that he envies kris for claiming chanyeol first because it’s not fair how pretty you are completed with such alluring voice...

chanyeol feels kris tenses before he comments rather wryly, “i’ll make sure to let minseokkie know about that, hyung.”

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“not funny okay,” chanyeol huffs, “but whatever! i’m going to shoot a variety show tomorrow! i’m so excited! how are you? how’s jongdae?”

kris clears his throat.

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that’s enough,” kris takes chanyeol’s iphone and apologizes to baekhyun

marvelous, this is just

[stupidrhapsody]

I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU DUUUUUDE ♥