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style180

SHINee fanfic: Of all the mistakes in history

Jul 15, 2009 12:10

Title: Of All the Mistakes In History
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: angst covered by humor.
Rating: PG-16
Warnings: strong language. more alcohol & sexual references
Summary: Key wakes up from another "mistake" -- the best one night stand -- with his best friend.
Disclaimer: the guys belong to SM.
Length: 1/? (971 words) Part 2

( The hangar rattles quietly on the bar and Key spares Jonghyun a glance -- still asleep and that‘s good for right now, he doesn‘t need to be awake. )

!fanfic, jongkey, key, shinee, -otp, jonghyun

Comments 23

siaht July 15 2009, 17:46:55 UTC

What you guys think? Where's the second part? I'm demanding it right now.

LOL It feels so different reading this, because of the revolt Key felt for what happened, I don't think I've ever read something akin. Well I might have, but still this one is very different. Maybe for he's acting... weird, I mean, I can almost see him in my head scowling to himself, venting his revolt on poor furniture, huffing and puffing almost childishly... Idk. Maybe I'm weird myself LOL

Anyways, I was serious about demanding a continuation. u_u

style180 July 15 2009, 18:46:28 UTC

don't shoot me. xD

yeah, like, how can one person be such a slut //is shot by key// and not regret a single thing? it's time for a change up! //shot again// sometimes i think he vents on taemin, but for the sake of that poor boy i didn't do that.

<3 ;D

siaht July 15 2009, 19:19:40 UTC

You're right! I'm glad you came up with this! ^^/

But omg venting on Taemin, that would be so mean D: But why exactly do you think this? And how would he vent on the poor baby boy? xDD

style180 July 15 2009, 19:37:32 UTC

awww. <33 i'm happier you enjoyed it.

just think about it, Key going through mood swings like a PMSing mom and probably yelling at him just for the hell of it. xD how? housework and more yelling, lolol.

dorkyy_azn0221 July 15 2009, 18:19:17 UTC

ahhhhh continue continue!!!
i beg of youuu >.

style180 July 15 2009, 18:47:26 UTC

^_^ okay, okay. xD

dorkyy_azn0221 July 15 2009, 18:49:07 UTC

yayyy!! *hug*

spindriftt July 15 2009, 18:47:51 UTC

you have to continue! :D
lmao, i feel evil, but this was thoroughly amusing (key, don't shoot me bb); i love your characterization of key- it was something out of the norm yet more realistic than in many other fics i've read.

i can so imagine him being childish and glaring at inanimate objects like that, even when he's not hungover :P

anyway, please do continue! im enjoying this way too much for it to end here!

style180 July 15 2009, 19:03:26 UTC

;D

LOL, don't feel evil, it's made to be laughed at -- key has many different sides ~ realistic? really? i was hoping he wouldn't be a bit too out of character. ;D

ME TOO, but i think taemin or jonghyun are mostly on the other end of that glaring. xDDDD

i will. <3

ontokki July 15 2009, 19:20:10 UTC

OMG. YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE.
I need Jjong to wake up and I need to find out what happens after he wakes up!!!
The way you describe every gives me such a vivid imagery♥
Ugh, I love your angsty Key. I'm pretty sure deep down inside he wants more~

Now, give me the next part♥

style180 July 15 2009, 19:43:16 UTC

I WILL, BB!

ohhhhh, you'll find out sooner or later
i guess that means it passes satisfactory?! //is happy//
angsty/slutty Key ftw, and if he wants more? we'll see.~

lol, sure thing.

meggayi July 16 2009, 04:48:05 UTC

write more!!XDDD
key's pov is not enough to satisfy my junky curious brain, i need jong's!!
perhaps he'll tell us more*evil laughs*
i don't know why i evil laughed but oh well...

continue it my dear~<3

style180 July 16 2009, 05:03:17 UTC

will do!
oh, hehe, you'll get jonghyun's point of view, trust me. >:D

yessssss ~ <333