Shinee fanfic: Bad timing

Sep 04, 2009 22:21

Title: Bad Timing
Characters/Pairing: Onew, Jongkey
Genre: Comedy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Evidently, the leader also has bad timing. (sequel to ungodly hours) for siaht. :D
Disclaimer: the guys belong to SM.
Length: oneshot. 2600 words.

This time, Onew is expecting it. He can hear the sounds -- the obvious sounds of them… yeah. He can just hear them, so he knows what exactly he’s about to walk in on. )

onew, !fanfic, jongkey, key, shinee, -otp, jonghyun

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siaht September 5 2009, 03:07:41 UTC
AND I'M NINJA ENOUGH TO GET THIS JUST OUT OF THE OVEN OMG

/GLOMPS FOREVER

BRB READING ALKSHXLAHDAASLKDHLASHD

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siaht September 5 2009, 03:49:48 UTC
Okay I think I can do this.

I was mildly surprised when the first lines allowed me to know that the fic was in Onew's perspective. It was a nice surprise and had me very curious at how you'd manage it. And of course, it was up to and maybe beyond my expectations. Even because, as I said, my expectation was already changed when I started reading ( ... )

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style180 September 5 2009, 04:25:00 UTC
JKFDGHDFUGIHEIGHSJYFGBHSDFBS;F'SKLFJDISFHSDIU omfg. you seriously do not know how happy it makes me that this was up to (DID YOU SAY BEYOND?!) your expectations. ugh, where's my thesaurus (i need bigger words) ;-;

see, like, ever since i heard of onew being in the milk club, it changed my perspective of him. i used to think he was a total goof, but then i heard in one interview where he said something like "i'm like tofu because i can curl into a ball in a room full of people and no one will notice me." then what i like to think is that he is the type of guy to try and try and try until he succeeds, but when he fails and fails and fails (and doesn't realize it's not his fault) he'll take it into his own hands and make it worse, but eventually will make something good out of it. idk. i don't think that made sense. >.>

omg thank you. <3 i have to admit it is, i had to stop and think "what would onew really do?" because he's the type where you can write him reclusive, like a looser taemin or minho, or a bit more aggressive-like ( ( ... )

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siaht September 5 2009, 05:24:41 UTC
YEAH I SAID BEY0ND BECAUSE I WAS WAITING ME SOME ORDINARY JONGKEY SMUT - not that coming from you it'd be anywhere near ordinary, but - YOU TOTALLY PAWNED ME ( ... )

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r_hr_maniac September 5 2009, 10:51:34 UTC
I really love your Onew. Mostly because I believe that this is how he really is...well, mostly :D
And Jongkey really can't keep their hands off of each other so I think that this fanfiction's true brilliancy is in how you keep it all kind of real 8D
I love this, I really do. And I admire you for thinking up so many situations that are different and don't make the reader bored ♥

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style180 September 5 2009, 20:16:03 UTC
omg. x.x thank you, i think realism or the jongkey is what i was going for. i'm happy to know you think i achieved that. ;D

no, it isn't me, it's the backspace button. it did so much for this piece. ;-;

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ontokki September 5 2009, 15:40:06 UTC
OMG. ok ok ok
Your Onew is SO real and I was totally picturing everything you wrote. And how you managed to stick Jongkey into this story is genius, pure genius. I love it so much omg. I really wished Onew would take some pics of Jongkey doing their thing. I'd pay so much for it =x
Mem'ing this~

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style180 September 5 2009, 20:21:38 UTC
dfjhdsfjkhsjkfs omfg, even through all the typo's i've been too lazy to correct?! jongkey is able to weasel their way into nearly everything i write but is that a bad thing??. I WROTE IT JUST FOR THAT BECAUSE WHO WOULDN'T WANT TO BUY THAT?!?!

holy shi-, ilu. <333

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ontokki September 5 2009, 20:25:47 UTC
pfft I didn't see any typos LOL I was so excited while reading it~
It's not a bad thing~ Jongkey just have that kind of effect XD

ilu2<3

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papersanguine February 14 2010, 18:36:14 UTC
Oh my gosh that was so fantastic! Not only did it have my OTP but Jinki being...well, Jinki! You are officially my favorite person....EVER!

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