Sorry about the cliffhanger! Next chapter will be up soon so I won't torture you for long!
I hope it becomes clearer at the end, have you ever read the poem? It will probably be more demonstrated in the second or third of the trilogy or something.
Wow! Quite the emotional ride this chapter. Hermione tries to send the guys back, but it fails. Then there was the interlude between the two. I loved "Draco fell asleep first and Harry looked at him blurrily, silver hair shining, skin like marble but so warm. His Draco." Very lovely imagery. Then the whole thing with Draco's mother. What are you up to with this? How could his mother look as gaunt as she did? Or is this a nightmare? I guess I will have to wait for the next installment as I wonder what will happen with Harry and Draco.
Thanks for commenting! It's so useful when people point out which bits they liked or disliked so thanks, love. Aha, you'll have to wait and see! Hope you enjoyed it.
Lowering his mouth softly onto Draco’s he pressed their lips together in the sweetest, most tender kiss he had ever initiated. Draco fell asleep first and Harry looked at him blurrily, silver hair shining, skin like marble but so warm. His Draco. I really like how you write Harry, tender but not maudlin. Don't get me wrong, the sex is great, but these moments just stuck with me.
“I had a dream,” Draco said, “but I don’t want to talk about it.”
“What if Martin Luther King had said that?” *laughs delightedly*
“I love you,” Harry said suddenly, then looked surprised at himself. Ohhhhhhhhh. :(( Would they even want to return to their past selves anymore? They won't have any memory of their future love, will they? Frankly, I'd rather take the easy way out and stay in the future and have hawt sexx0r than go through all that pain again.
Yay, thanks for reviewing! I love thoughtful reviews like that, they are so useful! I think I'd rather stay in the sex-filled future than go back as well but hey, you'll just have to wait and see. *grins evilly*
Yay! An update.
anonymous
August 18 2004, 05:51:35 UTC
Sorry, its a random stranger reading your fic... hope you don't mind because I love this story. I am so glad you updated. WIPs make me all squirmy, I hate waiting for the next chapters - but you are pretty quick. (Besides I think it would be worth the wait even if you weren't so speedy.) Poor Draco - first he finds out all his friends & family are gone, now he 'sees' his Mom die. I am certain there is more to Harry killing Narcissa than was in that dream...right??? Well, I hope there is anyway. Aww... Harry admitted he loves him. I want to yell at Hermione - why hasn't she thought more about why she can't remember this from her fifth year... and why aren't they trying harder to find Snape? (Ph! I can't believe I just requested Snape!!) Sorry these are just the rants going through my head whilst I wait for the next installment. - Parvati
Re: Yay! An update.stylophileAugust 23 2004, 05:03:35 UTC
Hey, I love meeting random strangers! Thank you for taking the time out to let me know what you think, it's much appreciated. I try to be quick, I hate WIPs too!
Feel free to rant, I love reading anything anyone comments! Next chapter will be up soon so hopefully some of your questions will be answered.
Such a sad chapter, this one. The characters are going through damn tough times. Hmm... I'm wondering why you pulled Ginny into this (and I am contradicting since I hate her. lol!). Harry said he loves him! Happiness! Oh, and was it real what Draco saw in his dream? Or just an imagery nightmare? Will you even answer my questions? *hint hint* I have loads more positive reactions but can't quite put them into words. All you need to know is that they're all good.
His Draco.
Oi. Those two words make me smile enough! ^^
OMGOMGOMG *starts hyperventilating* You're going to see them again?! I am just too jealous! Take me with you! lol! He is just a total sex god. I can just melt when I hear him sing. He's jus tto die for I hope they come to our country, but I doubt it'll happen anytime in the next 1000 years. 0_o
HEE! I try so hard to be quick! Thanks for noticing!
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and it seems to be raising lots of questions from everyone! Next one will be up soon so I'm sorry to keep you in suspense! I will say that all the dreams they are having are accurate because they are more like flashbacks to the years they skipped (in ym mind anyway).
AAAAGH! YES! He was so amazing last time that I couldn't resist! He really is so beautiful up close, and such an amazing performer. *Flails* Where do you live? Come with me and we can giggle at appropriate moments!
AAAAGH! YES! He was so amazing last time that I couldn't resist! He really is so beautiful up close, and such an amazing performer. *Flails* Where do you live? Come with me and we can giggle at appropriate moments!
I can picture hearing him live.. He sings so god-like on the radio, I'd just die if I hear him live! Beautiful up close??!! Eep! I can juts imagine *melts* I'm all the way from Asia, so I'm pretty sure that'll never happen. How I'd love to though!! At Appropriate moments? Tsk must giggle everytime he opens his mouth ^^ Must... calm... down xp
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You're cruel. but i love you anyway and i love this fic no matter how long it takes.
Human Abstract, huh? Don't really see how it fits the story, truthfully....maybe it becomes clearer when the story is finished, yeah?
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Sorry about the cliffhanger! Next chapter will be up soon so I won't torture you for long!
I hope it becomes clearer at the end, have you ever read the poem? It will probably be more demonstrated in the second or third of the trilogy or something.
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*sheepish* no...i'm terrible with poems.
yes, you should stop torturing me, it's quite painful, you know. *hug*
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Draco fell asleep first and Harry looked at him blurrily, silver hair shining, skin like marble but so warm. His Draco.
I really like how you write Harry, tender but not maudlin. Don't get me wrong, the sex is great, but these moments just stuck with me.
“I had a dream,” Draco said, “but I don’t want to talk about it.”
“What if Martin Luther King had said that?”
*laughs delightedly*
“I love you,” Harry said suddenly, then looked surprised at himself.
Ohhhhhhhhh. :(( Would they even want to return to their past selves anymore? They won't have any memory of their future love, will they? Frankly, I'd rather take the easy way out and stay in the future and have hawt sexx0r than go through all that pain again.
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Thank you again!
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Poor Draco - first he finds out all his friends & family are gone, now he 'sees' his Mom die. I am certain there is more to Harry killing Narcissa than was in that dream...right??? Well, I hope there is anyway.
Aww... Harry admitted he loves him. I want to yell at Hermione - why hasn't she thought more about why she can't remember this from her fifth year... and why aren't they trying harder to find Snape? (Ph! I can't believe I just requested Snape!!)
Sorry these are just the rants going through my head whilst I wait for the next installment.
- Parvati
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Feel free to rant, I love reading anything anyone comments! Next chapter will be up soon so hopefully some of your questions will be answered.
Thanks again,
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Such a sad chapter, this one. The characters are going through damn tough times. Hmm... I'm wondering why you pulled Ginny into this (and I am contradicting since I hate her. lol!). Harry said he loves him! Happiness! Oh, and was it real what Draco saw in his dream? Or just an imagery nightmare? Will you even answer my questions? *hint hint* I have loads more positive reactions but can't quite put them into words. All you need to know is that they're all good.
His Draco.
Oi. Those two words make me smile enough! ^^
OMGOMGOMG *starts hyperventilating* You're going to see them again?! I am just too jealous! Take me with you! lol! He is just a total sex god. I can just melt when I hear him sing. He's jus tto die for I hope they come to our country, but I doubt it'll happen anytime in the next 1000 years. 0_o
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I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and it seems to be raising lots of questions from everyone! Next one will be up soon so I'm sorry to keep you in suspense! I will say that all the dreams they are having are accurate because they are more like flashbacks to the years they skipped (in ym mind anyway).
AAAAGH! YES! He was so amazing last time that I couldn't resist! He really is so beautiful up close, and such an amazing performer. *Flails* Where do you live? Come with me and we can giggle at appropriate moments!
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I can picture hearing him live.. He sings so god-like on the radio, I'd just die if I hear him live! Beautiful up close??!! Eep! I can juts imagine *melts* I'm all the way from Asia, so I'm pretty sure that'll never happen. How I'd love to though!! At Appropriate moments? Tsk must giggle everytime he opens his mouth ^^ Must... calm... down xp
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