i told you i loved you a week after i told you that it was too much.

Aug 11, 2008 20:28

there is a certain way that
we watch ourselves in the mirror,
when the light in your room is silver
from the streetlight that's been replaced.
i like to glance at our shoulders when
i roll onto my back, and
your body still shakes
when i mention that night.

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ghettoprincess2 August 12 2008, 18:56:42 UTC
I love your poems, they always make me want to paint them!
xoxo

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losxprestamos August 13 2008, 05:39:55 UTC
"i like to glance at our shoulders when
i roll onto my back"

Everything is jointly owned when they're being described as looked at, not not anywhere else in the poem.

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