Robot

Mar 19, 2009 23:19

I am a high-tech prototype, serial #14196258948. I was built to go to space, and to live there, dodging comets. Drinking moonlight. Staring at stars, trying not to get caught in their glow until I fall and all the titanium shielding falls away ( Read more... )

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mjgv March 20 2009, 17:25:53 UTC
Dylan, you are clever and talented. Good work.

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styrofork March 21 2009, 01:50:38 UTC
Thank you!

It now occurs to me that I probably should have lj-cut this, but I don't actually know how.

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gheofabulousduk March 22 2009, 07:20:35 UTC
This was terrifying and heartbreaking and very painful to read.

It was brilliant, but the last few paragraphs didn't feel right to me.

Not really sure why, on either of those things.

~Duk

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