AND NOW.....

Jan 02, 2005 10:41

a poem.

My alarm goes off,
but I am already awake,
This is not a sign.

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roslyn January 6 2005, 21:21:31 UTC
It was almost a haiku, too. What if you got rid of the 'but' from the second line, to get rid of that extra syllable?

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:-) subfusc_song January 8 2005, 14:11:54 UTC
toot true. Maybe it was my plan all along! AHA! A thrown off balance Haiku. A butku.

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