Re: Hmmm.....subhuman2kJanuary 14 2002, 02:30:59 UTC
There will be :) But it's more important to get across the lust of all the characters, rather than explicit scenes of sexual congress (heh, but this is scifi so what the hell?). It's important for the feel of the story (and the conclusion) that the reader understands the growing tension between all characters. It's critical, in fact.
Anyway...
Thinking of setting up a twist to the love triangle orginally planned. First it was going to be a simple thing between Lucy and Silas... but this is much more interesting: A thing between Lucy and Mae (Silas's daughter, who is very young (15-16). More of an obsession? I mean Lucy is a... well something and Mae *is* obsessed with all things "goth". Kinda makes poetic sence. Then I can have Silas "lust" for Lucy (well, she is gorgeous). It all kinda fits :)
Shit I hope this doesn't come across all misogynistic :( I'll shoot myself.
Re: Hmmm.....redgildaJanuary 14 2002, 02:44:38 UTC
well the 'growing tension' between the characters is what I love the most ! It's the same for movies - I prefer a well acted intense dressed-scene rather than some hot naked parts, really.... :)
i better...pixiepetraJanuary 14 2002, 02:05:27 UTC
i better get an advance copy... i rarely read but just for you i'll read it entirely... i know i know.. naughty me for not reading... it's not a passion and it's always an obligation to me when i open a book
i told you to go to bed... not only did you NOT respond you didn't even bother reading it i'm sure... TSK TSK TSK
Re: i better...subhuman2kJanuary 14 2002, 02:23:29 UTC
A few close friends will get copies to read when it's had a first edit, which I hope will be late March :) Long LONG way to go yet though :/ I wish there was some way of just dumping the story from my head to Word in one go. It would save a lot of heartache!
Grrr! You're gonna spoil the whole story if you keep writing it all in here! :-P
I knew Lucy was Red. Do I get a prize? :)
Oh and if you want to download straight from your brain into word I have a cerebral cortex interface you can borrow if you want. It's plug and play though so it probably won't work. :-P
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Oh and I want a signed copy once u get it published:-)
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Anyway...
Thinking of setting up a twist to the love triangle orginally planned. First it was going to be a simple thing between Lucy and Silas... but this is much more interesting: A thing between Lucy and Mae (Silas's daughter, who is very young (15-16). More of an obsession? I mean Lucy is a... well something and Mae *is* obsessed with all things "goth". Kinda makes poetic sence. Then I can have Silas "lust" for Lucy (well, she is gorgeous). It all kinda fits :)
Shit I hope this doesn't come across all misogynistic :( I'll shoot myself.
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i told you to go to bed... not only did you NOT respond you didn't even bother reading it i'm sure... TSK TSK TSK
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I knew Lucy was Red. Do I get a prize? :)
Oh and if you want to download straight from your brain into word I have a cerebral cortex interface you can borrow if you want. It's plug and play though so it probably won't work. :-P
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