Breathe 7 - Sobering

[suborbital]

Title: Breathe - A Chronicle of Skandar and William
Chapter: 7
Pairing: Will/Skandar
Rating: R
Summary: William finds the reality of his past inadequacies to be truly sobering.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, and they have no bearing on anyone at all. It's FICTION.
Warnings: All of them.

Breathe
A Chronicle of Skandar and William

Comments

[laminy]

Oh my god, oh my god. Yes, Skandar, yes! Your William is finally back, he has to be. Oh my gosh, what a great chapter. Finally. Finally. All I really wanted was for them to finally just shut everybody else up and just talk and they did. Oh, that's so good. That's good. So much more than I expected.

What a damn good chapter, I love it.

[suborbital]

I had a couple possible endings for this chapter, and finally settled on this. I thought the story needed a bit of happy. And the start to this chapter probably made it seem like things ere going to be quite dark.

See, Skandar has Sarah, and William has Jimmy, and Anna is like the voice of reason between them all.

And you're right, they just needed time to talk alone. Hopefully William can sort himself out. I think Jimmy could still factor in. Time will tell. I think William knows he is really on his last change with Skandar.

[furymyhooker]

where are you? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

[elexandros]

You posted, you posted! You make a Lizzie happy!
Now its about damn time William came around, and it makes sense that it was his kids. (Eddy is just too cute. I want me one.)
I'm still really glad Anna's there. She's so grounding for them. I just hope Sarah understands that...Anna has been a really big help, I think.
This is beautiful. Its about time Skand and Will are back togethr like they should be! Its about time, Will, you jack ass.
I'ma kill Jimmmy. That way he can't do anything.

[faerie_dance]

Damn straight you're going to try, Will! And you're going to do! You are going to become Skan's slave for the next REST of your life! And Eddy's and Petey's! You'll have no life until they accept you back!

Oh, and when you kill Jimmy too. You just don't forget that this is where you belong! It's time to start being strong! So stop being a complete tosser and grow a brain and some balls! Because you're going to need them if you want to face off against that stupid prick Jimmy! I mean it! If I don't see you standing up and fighting for what you love and what you know, both Skan and the boys AND what's left of your dignity, I WILL hurt you!

Bah!

Great chappie though, meh Subbeh. Really great. I luffed it. YayY for Skandar! And yayY for a Skandar with no shirt on! And yayY for the boys who brought William around. You boys rock! Woot! *does the LP cheer*

more?

[anonymous]

Hey is there more to come?....seriously this has got to be one of the best romantic story ever written!....not that i've read so many...but argh! its heartbreaking and yet so deep...its its its its its INDESCRIBABLE!