Breathe 9 - Just Breathe - Part 2

[suborbital]

Part 2 is under the cut, because LJ has crap posting limits.  Sorry!

SPACE IS FUN

Skandar missed his kids.  More than anything he missed his kids.  He’d spent a week in Fiji while William spent a week uninterrupted with the kids.  He talked to them each morning, so the boys would he was thinking of them.  He felt a smattering of guilt for leaving

Comments

[yamisadomazo]

Wow. I seriously want to punch Skan in the face. This story is one giant Yo-Yo! It's so addicting though...I just hope that you end it happily...unlike a certain OTHER series that shall not be named *cough*JaM*cough*

>_<

Keep up the good work Sub!

I worship thee!

[suborbital]

I think everyone wants to punch Skandar in the face lol. Turnabout indeed. What 'other' series? :D Hehehe.

Thank you!!!

[faerie_dance]

Hi, I'm sorry to be an extremely huge bitch, but your default icon is one of mine and its the one icon that I haven't shared with anyone because it's my special icon. You also did not even credit me for it. Would you please remove it? I'm sorry, I don't want to be a bitch about it but it's rather special to me. Thank you!

[yamisadomazo]

Sorry. I just found it on Photobucket. Didn't know it was yours sorry.

[elexandros]

This was really awesome. I cant' believe Skandar did it. I don't care what freedom tastes like it just doesn't seem like him. He's the voice of reason, but I'm sure he'll come around.
I want an Eddy. Someday, when I spawn, I hope its an Eddy. That kid is too freaking adorable I love him and I wants one of my own.
I want to see more of Anna/Sarah. Mind you, I'm afraid to ask cause I'm sure it'll end up with le drama, but I'd love to see more of the dynamic that makes those two. It was neat to see them: a bit of a different um...thing...in the midst of all this. Sorta a way to remind that there's life outside of Will and Skan. (I know! I know, right!? Weird!)
This was awesome. I want more!

[suborbital]

I'm going to kick a cat in your honour.

[lighttheshadows]

I've just finished reading all (I think) of your longer stories and I keep falling in love.
But you always end up breaking my heart.
Like in this chapter. Poor Will (although on many levels he deserves it). I just want to hug him and then hit him. And then hit Skandar and then hug him.
Gah! So much emotion!
Does this one have a happy ending? (Don't actually tell me!)
Also because of CoS it's become my new goal in life to throw someone a surprise wedding. :-)

[suborbital]

Thank you! Yeah, I think everyone needs hugs all round. I won't tell you the ending! Lol. Thank you for commenting!

[silverbluewings]

What can I say, really speechless you have made my day with the new chapter I was so glad when I saw it posted I now I finally read it with no one bothering, so to the chapter I got to say stupid Skan how could he, but again I kind of wanted something like this, but I don't know now I feel bad for the kids, like poor Petey he just made this family picture which I know that is beautiful and then this those two are really insane, I think what they need is a good rough session of.... LOVE of course.
Also I got to say that "Meh punch ooh face" is the sentence of the week I'll probably use it like crazy from now on for the next couple of days till I read more of this amazing story, keep writing you know you are a kicking ass writer sooo update FAST!!!! and thank you very much for the story, and the time that I spend reading it is like my own breathing time. =)
Silver Blue

[suborbital]

Updated, how's that for fast? :D Of course, a lot of it is written ahead so, it's not really writing that fast lol. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though! Lov e your icon. And yeah, roles have reversed a little, but it's all good. I hope you like the next chapter! Thanks :D