Breathe 10 - Pain is Relative, Part 1

[suborbital]

 
Title: Breathe
Pairing: Will/Skandar, Anna/OFC
Rating: R
Summary: Skandar and William reach a resolution.  .
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real!  It's FICTION.
A/N: Breathe is the sequel series to ' Chronicles of Skandar'. Read that first!  Also, this chapter contains lesbefriends smex. Don't hate the femmeslash!
Read earlier chapters - Breathe.

Breathe
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Comments

[yamisadomazo]

Yay! Amazing! I feel so bad about Anna and Sarah. I know you are an angst machine, so I, as your loyal glutton for such angst, await the next installment with bated breath. >_<

I'm glad to see some improvement between Skan and Will...even if that improvement is surrounded by confusion.

I love this story and I LUFF TEH SUB!

[yamisadomazo]

Oh yeah! and rock on! I was the first to comment! *cheers*

[suborbital]

*pins a badge on you* :D

[suborbital]

I LUFF YOU RIGHT BACK!

Thank you for commenting. It's true, I am an angst-bucket but sometimes the bucket must be emptied. But when?

Thanks :D

[elexandros]

Wow.
Just wow.
Or guh, as Skandar said.
That first part made my heart sink. I thought it was all over, but then the scroll bar keeps going and I still have faith. ;) I'm glad Will's calmed down, and now he's becoming the old Will again. The one thats clever enough to know how to calm Skandar down and make him feel loved. Oh, and I still want an Eddy.
I think I want an Anna and Sarah too. o_O (Assholian is my new favorite word and it will be used in real, day-to-day life.) Sarah never fails to entertain me and when I asked for more Anna/Sarah, wheee, there was more! Poor Anna, and poor Sarah. I can understand them both, and it sucks majorly. I hope it works out for them. They're too hot to have it not work out. :( I'm glad to finally really see their relationship up close, though.
More more more!

[suborbital]

You still have the faith? Aren't you a persistent little munchkin? :P

Will is becoming more like his old self, but he might be a year or so too late. Time will tell.

[laminy]

“It wasn’t just to hurt me. It was so we’d be the same. So you wouldn’t hate me if you took me back.”

I love that line, because I think that it's true. And I just love the image of Skandar and Will sitting around, bleeding and bruised.

I'm really happy to see that there is some progress with the boys. I'm so happy that William's finally figured out everything he did wrong and he's taking care of his kids and he's so sweet with them. If anybody can get Skandar back to his old self, it would be him.

All that talk about Skandar not being with a man in so long...kind of makes me think hope that he'll be with one soon? Only a certain man though, of course :)

You know, I do have the feeling that I am in the minority, in not particularly being a fan of Sarah/Anna. I don't hate the femmeslash! I don't generally read femmeslash, but I do not hate it. I just don't think that I've ever been a particular fan of Sarah's, which you may have noticed. But ooh, it's getting angsty.

[suborbital]

Hey, do you not like female characters in general? I'm just curious because you didn't like Victoria either? And she was yours! lol. And I don't think you liked Susan? I don't know how sad it is that I remember all this lol. Mind you, I don't recall you ever disliking Anna, so I think that nulls that line of thought. And hey, I know about minorities! I was well in the minority on hoping Victoria would work out with Dyl [because I had a hard time forgiving his Mister Mister]. As for Skandar not being with a man for so long, we all know what a horndog he is. He loves slaying that particular dragon lol. And you're right about Will, I think, in that he's starting to feel more like his old self. That might help. Thank you!

[laminy]

I did like Victoria to begin with, the idea of her, but then I decided that I wanted Danny back. So I started to write Victoria in a bad light so that most readers wouldn't be upset when she left, or be surprised when she left Hunter.

There are female characters that I like and then there are characters that I don't. Some of my most favourite characters are television are females. I just don't think that I ever liked Sarah. And no, I don't really like Susan's character in the books or movies, but I like Lucy, so...

[lighttheshadows]

My heart is still broken, but it looks like it might recover.
I'm so glad that Skandar and Will are getting on better. I do hope it lasts. Although Sarah and Anna cause me enough distress to not be overly happy about it.
Oh I do love your angst.

[suborbital]

Thank you! :D

[kiddobill]

damn go sarah and anna. i know the story is about will and skan but seriously it's those two girls that keep them going. I love them! and damn are they hot! lol.
I so happy william chilled down. hope he still bites his tounge as much as he can at least until he and skan can trade blows without them turning into real strikes.
Damn...still love those girls. lol.
Choosing what's best for the kids. I love them all for that, and Will fighting the divorce is even better. Just a flat no thanks skan. take as much time as you want but you're not getting the divorce. lol can i dare to dream?
Sub this story is great and filled with hope and tourture and pain and upheavals and falls. Love it. Take care and can't wait for the next chapter

[suborbital]

I wasn't really sure how well Sarah/Anna would go down if I brought them to the fore a little. I was especially nervous about the fact the first sex scene in Breathe was not our Will/Skan, but femmeslash! Lol. So I am happy that you weren't turned off by it. And you're right, you know, those girls do keep Will and Skandar going.

You can dream as much as you like! Thank you :D

[kiddobill]

yeah i was a bit surprised that the two girls are the first to break the pg13 mold of this story. but the drama llama parade that's separating Skan and Will only makes sense they haven't (pardon my bluntness) just gotten it on already. They need serious make up sex (again pardon my bluntness