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suborbital

Breathe 10, Pain is Relative - Part 3

Jul 09, 2008 11:07

Title: Breathe
Pairing: Will/Skandar, Anna/OFC
Rating: R
Summary: Skandar spends time with his boys and William finds his family.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real! It's FICTION.
A/N: Breathe is the sequel series to ' Chronicles of Skandar'. Read that first! Read earlier chapters - Breathe.

Breathe

A Chronicle of Skandar and William

Chapter 10c - Pain is ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

anonymous July 9 2008, 05:20:04 UTC

oh man same here i was just getting ready for bed checked in a found it. a great way to tumble into the sheets ( ... )

suborbital July 12 2008, 19:59:51 UTC

Who is this? KiddoBill?

Whoever it is, thank you for commenting!!! Jimmy is a bum, it's true. And yes, it's definitely obvious they could still be happy together, but I think they probably need to work on the basics first. Like actually liking each other and getting along as friends. It will all just dpened on how much they want it, I guess.

kiddobill July 13 2008, 22:43:26 UTC

lol yeah sry it was me. can't help other than comment lol. about to get into the next two chapters lol..um wish me luck??? lol take care sub

yamisadomazo July 9 2008, 05:34:36 UTC

This was wonderful. I'm so glad things are starting to work out. I'm not taking that for granted, but at least it wasn't a cliffhanger. ^_^ You're such a talented writer, keep up the good work!

suborbital July 12 2008, 20:01:04 UTC

thank you! :D Yeah sometimes I can't help myself with cliffhangers. And this final scene actually wasn't supposed to be the lsat scene. I thought I would have to cut it for length, but thankfully it fit. I'm glad as I really wanted this scene to be the final. It wasn't a cliffy nad had a nice feel to it. thank you for commenting!

elexandros July 9 2008, 20:42:54 UTC

I love the collection of happy(happier?) moments. The last bit with Skan and WillMos in this part makes me wibble, but in a happy way. It reminds me of highschool days when I'd be crushing hard and the guy and I would get to do a project together or something. (I'm SO nerdy. -_-)
Anna and sarah ftw. I hope we get to see more of them. Maybe a dinner with those two and their parents? :D Oh, man.
Eddy and Petey are love. I want one. Um. Two? lol.
The ending still kills me. Its like...I want to hug that last bit. o_O

suborbital July 12 2008, 20:04:12 UTC

Yeah the last part rocks! I'm glad we got to post it how we thought it would be best. Nerds rule, baby. :D:D:D:D:D

silverbluewings July 9 2008, 22:46:41 UTC

Sooo I know that in the other post I said I'll only take me a couple of minutes to read this part, but the thing is that this day was full of good surprises for me so when I was in the half of the chapter I got an email from a friend and got to leave, then I received my visa papers so now I can study in California for the next semester and also I got my grades and guess what I pass all my classes so I'm extremely happy and I'm more happy to see or read that my favorite couple is in their way to get back together soo GO SKAN & WILL and also Yupi!! for Sarah that finally will get her happy ending, I loved the sleeping sofa scene very very beautiful, cannot wait for the next chapter,
read you later, Silver Blue.

Pd: “Meh punch ooh face!”

suborbital July 12 2008, 20:06:55 UTC

So glad you liked the sofa scene! :D And congratulations! That's great news about your visa :D

whiteoutwalls July 10 2008, 15:45:02 UTC

The anticipation is killing me. Have fun in Queensland...post soon, please???

suborbital July 12 2008, 20:07:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm having fun. And I posted! Thank you for commenting :D