Breathe 12 - For Better or Worse

[suborbital]

Title: Breathe
Pairing: Will/Skandar, Anna/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Summary: For better or worse, they said.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real! It's FICTION.
Warnings: Sex.
A/N: Breathe is the sequel series to ' Chronicles of Skandar'. Read that first! Read earlier chapters - Breathe.

Breathe
A Chronicle of Skandar and William
Chapter 12 - For Better or Worse

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Comments

[numptysmeg]

That only took me something like 7 hours to read.. probably a bit more cause I stopped reading at 4am to sleep a bit lol

Awww they're so cute. I feel sorry for both of them because Skan was trying then started being a poophead, and will started as a poophead and then tried

GAH let them be happy! :)

[suborbital]

Lol wow, you're dedicated! And you're right, it's like a switcheroo haha.

[whiteoutwalls]

So...it's definetly a bad idea to read your story in a public library because I literally yelled for joy at the end of this chapter.

Loved Skandar's song by the way.

[suborbital]

I'm glad you liked the song :D and the ending! Thank you :D

[hotfruits]

I love this, so very much. Can't wait for the next bit <33

[suborbital]

Thank you! :D

WOW

[rakz_87]

Finally i've caught up. Been reading this like for the last 3 and a half weeks. Been up 'till 3 in the morning trying to read as much, but finally i'm here!!! Btw this is gunna be quite long so bear with me.lol

Rest of of my LUFF!!!!

[rakz_87]

Anyway so yeah. The beggining well it kinda takes one by surprise. The kids, the careers and they way they have kinda drifted apart. Going through the story showing how much they indeed care about one another but not able to fully appreciate the other because of what they have done. At the start of their relationship there wasn't so much holding them apart really because it (their love) was so young so their wasn't much one could keep on the other, but seven years later. Well alot has happened to be built up and well vented to the other. It's so starnge to think of their love, and how perfect it seems and now. Well obviously changes have happend and this Chapter does leave one quite hopeful, but wrongly, in the sense that you know (because you're writing it) that something is gunna go terribly wrong. And well although i'm happy for them , i don't want to take it too high, purely because of CoS 14 Choices. The ways it invoked such emotions and well this "chronicle" is so much darker than CoS and so leaves me feeling somewhat reserved

Re: Rest of of my LUFF!!!!

[suborbital]

Lol @ your comments about Breathe. You are so right. It is a darker Chronicle than CoS was. I am very evil and not to be trusted! :D Wow, thank you so much for your comment! It makes me so very happy when people go to such lengths in feedback. And it helps me see how other people see my writing. And you read Sarah and Anna so well too in your comment. Thank you so much for this!

Re: Rest of of my LUFF!!!!

[rakz_87]

Oh your sooo welcome.I love this story, just needed to write something to(for?) you!!!!And really to get it off my chest, as you can imagine it was bulding, and not in the nice way.lol. God, i can't believe you did write "Breathe" after soo long though. Because with it being like 2 years since you did write CoS, and also although i was hoping you would it seemed to have ended. Coming to the End of CoS, although it was soo totally excellent, i just didn't want it to end, and then you wrote the next part, BREATHE, and although i remember you said it would be short, i love how, i presume, that because there is soo much to it you cant let it finish, and i love it!!! Keep it going, gives me another reason to sat up till 3 and READ!!!! love ya, Xx

btw, when is the next part due????, please tel us a guestimate date!!!!