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subsidingchaos

We've Kept the Blood We've Spilled (Fini)

Jul 17, 2013 00:43

A/N Well...here it is, for better or for worse. Thanks for coming along for the ride.Lost in his own melancholy, he doesn’t notice the human form on his front stoop until he is three steps away from it. So much for being a trained observer, he thinks to himself, right before he recognizes the coat the form is wearing ( Read more... )

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radleyboo July 17 2013, 05:05:40 UTC

So I'm just on LJ, looking for something, and BAM, I SEE THAT MISS BECCA HAS POSTED HER STORY AND I FREAK OUT BECAUSE I THOUGHT I WAS THE LAST TO KNOW. ANYWAY. JUST WHAT I NEEDED, TONIGHT!!

“It’s going to get hard again, isn’t it” -- you dirty minded woman. I legit laughed out loud.

I swear I loved EVERY BIT OF THIS. And I'm already telling you, lady---I'm going to bother you until you write another fic. Because I have NO IDEA where you've been hiding this whole time, but now that you've been discovered--we're gonna chase after you and find you and all your aliases. You can try pulling a J.K Rowling and hiding, BUT YOU SHALL NOT SUCCEED.

Anyway. Back to the story.

Her heart brought her there because it was out of alignment!!!!!! EEEEK!!! AND "Her warm, smiling eyes are roadmap to a lifetime of happiness."
SOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE

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med14 July 17 2013, 05:23:03 UTC

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What she said.

(collapses on floor due to overdose of feels)

sm_chick July 17 2013, 19:00:19 UTC

LOL, yeah. A radleyboo review is a hard act to follow. So, definitely what she said. But with extra kudos for the one-two punch of the vintage McNally double entendre with the "It's going to get hard, isn't it?" followed by the ending line "Can't wait to see where this is going" Perfect!!

subsidingchaos July 17 2013, 20:29:27 UTC

McNally can be a dirty, dirty girl - and she doesn't even know it :)

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overthebreakers July 17 2013, 07:57:31 UTC

I CAN'T ANYMORE. I QUIT MY LAME ATTEMPT AT PUTTING WORDS ON A PAGE. I'M TAKING UP PESTERING YOU FULL TIME FOR FICS BECAUSE I WILL MAKE IT MY LIFE'S WORK TO READ EVERY WORD.

ALSO: do not ask me to tell you about favorite parts of this fic. FUCKING EVERYTHING is the answer and I am a blithering mess.

SO THANKS VERY MUCH.

Now I need to re-read the whole box set - one foul swoop. Here I goooooooo.

subsidingchaos July 17 2013, 20:28:51 UTC

Uh, yeah - NO! In no way, shape or form is this spewing ANYWHERE CLOSE to your wonderfulness. And you will not stop your stories - don't make me come down there!

I am glad you liked it though, blithering messes are fun!

Did you like the mention of Sudbury? Seems I can't get that place off my mind...

Ain't No Mountain High Enough slm37 September 7 2013, 21:48:05 UTC

ooooookkaaaaayyyyy. So yeah, you wrote this how long ago and I'm FINALLY reviewing today. Why? Well, 1) I'm procrastinating writing the script for a wedding I'm officiating next Saturday 2) it's about time I gushed over this ( ... )