Comments | subsidingchaos: We've Kept the Blood We've Spilled

subsidingchaos

We've Kept the Blood We've Spilled

Jun 19, 2013 01:21

This was a bit of a Twitter fic that has grown into a bit more... (also, be advised, in MY head, the characters I borrowed from the Rookie Blue creators swear (a lot) and think naughty thoughts (even more than they swear).

The argument starts low and quiet at the scene of the found skirt (blood stains blooming on the white material, it looks ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

dcarj June 19 2013, 13:08:33 UTC

Just when you got my hopes up... Come on Sam!!

It was good. Love the idea of Andy working to be the better person here. But you just know it's going to blow up at some point, it just is.

There were so many good images in here - and him saying her name: "The voice was Sam, and everything they were and everything she always wanted them to be was wrapped up the singular way he said her name." No doubt about it; I can even hear the way he says it.

And Oliver and Traci guarding the door - of course they are! Oliver especially.

subsidingchaos June 19 2013, 13:42:28 UTC

Sam...I know right?! No worries, there is a part duex and Sam will let some of those pent up emotions bleed off a little.

Thanks for the comments - you are my very first review on my very first attempt at fiction :)

sm_chick June 20 2013, 23:53:37 UTC

That was my favorite part too!!! Loved the whole angry, frustrated, just cant take it anymore, all hell is about to break loose vibe of this. It was a bit of a tease, but I loved it!!!

OKAY WHAT!!! overthebreakers June 20 2013, 00:56:10 UTC

JFC ( ... )

Re: OKAY WHAT!!! subsidingchaos June 20 2013, 03:16:23 UTC

Ok. So. It doesn't suck?

tjf8048 June 20 2013, 02:43:23 UTC

OK - what she said!

Seriously DO. NOT. STOP. HERE!!!! I love when I can read a story like this and SEE IT HAPPENING RIGHT IN FRONT OF ME. And Overbreakers "it's at this point my heart rate is about to go through the roof because I am fully expecting somebody is going to shove somebody hard against the wall" absolutely 1,001% I thought this was going to happen. Please post more now!

subsidingchaos June 20 2013, 03:17:52 UTC

Not a fan of the cliffhanger? I promise I will post the second half (and it won't be nine months).

Thanks for the encouragement!

med14 June 20 2013, 04:01:28 UTC

MORE! NOW!

anu17 July 10 2013, 17:49:35 UTC

Fantastic Start!!! I know I'm gonna enjoy this fic :))
Yep Marlo is a bitch, we all know it!!!
Poor Andy :( but I love it when Andy gets really angry and I Loved the 'Yes SIR' bahahaha

Gaaaaahhh My heart brakes for that Man.
Sam, PLEASE TELL HER what you really feel and how you struggled when Andy left you for her UC work.

THANK YOU, I'm off to read 2nd chapter....