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subtle_shades

Touch - Chapter 14

Jul 16, 2011 05:02

Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven- ( Read more... )

pg-13, naruto, touch, fanfic

Comments 18

monique_27 August 2 2011, 19:05:23 UTC

Rokudaime made her practice it everyday in lieu of taijutsu. She was mean like that. <- hehe...awesome!

I can't even start putting down my favorite parts or lines because I would basically be re-posting your chapter. *lol* It's just...this whole story is just amazing. It amuses, entertains, and truly makes one think. The characters are written so well, as is the prose. The very idea is brilliant, and it's execution matches. I can only tell you that every update makes me smile (just because it's there) and makes me think.

Love it...just wanted you to know. :)

subtle_shades August 3 2011, 16:51:23 UTC

Aw shucks, that's super nice of you to say! and I'm so glad that this bit of silliness makes you smile and think.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Late to the Party! (Part 2) oroburos69 August 2 2011, 21:15:47 UTC

I really like Kakashi's hallucinations. As reflections of his own conscience or as reflections of how he feels Obito and Minato would want him to behave (lol that his hallucinations tell him how to behave appropriately in public), they make him a better person. Obviously, it would be preferable if they were an internal conscience rather than external hallucinations, but hey, it's nice to see that he does know how to and want to be a good person. Without them, I would probably consider your Kakashi to be a sociopath or to have serious, irresolvable social difficulties. With the hallucinations, I consider him a person so disconnected to himself that he assigns his sense of justice and right/wrong to other people because he can't acknowledge his own morality.

Also, it's just plan cute, in a psycho kind of way.

While his worries had been larger in scale, Kakashi was painfully familiar with her feelings.Empathy! Awwwwwww, so cute it kills me! Also, nice sign of him identifying with her, and an association I hadn't thought to make ( ... )

Re: Late to the Party! (Part 2) subtle_shades August 4 2011, 13:06:41 UTC

*is starry-eyed* You are all over stuff. Seriously ( ... )