how to save a life

[subtleslide]

| how to save a life | r | super junior | kyuhyun/donghae | 862w |

kyuhyun is trapped inside a collapsed building and donghae - he's not sure what donghae is.

Comments

[namikaze_jkc]

Wow. That's all I can say after this.
The ending was pretty sweet too, even if Donghae had to speed up Kyuhyun's death.. :D

[subtleslide]

haha, thank you :)

[applesnapple412]

;___________________________________;

WHYYYYYY. WHYYYYYYY. WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.
Er, at least they'll be together?

But oh my god ;_______; this broke my heart into pieces. And Donghae, omg how Donghae doesn't want to be left alone and then Kyuhyun's there trapped inside and ;__________;

;____________________;

[subtleslide]

/offers kleenex

don't cry :(

[victoriasong]

In trying to find the right word to describe this, but it's not coming to me.... It's dark (know theres a better word) and terrifying(?). I loved it, especially the way it ended :). Sorry about the lame review. It's super late right now. :/

[subtleslide]

it's not lame anon! dark/terrifying was what i was going for. i'm glad you liked it :)

thank you for reading!

[bonomanic]

Is it weird that I kept thinking how awful it must be for Donghae to be ghost, with him afraid of them and all? Ah, well, I'm weird like that.

I'd say your experiment was a success, girl. It's dark and intense, and the way Kyuhyun tries to find reasons for ghost!Donghae's existence makes him appear that much more desparate than as if he'd just accepted it. But it fits that he simply refuses to acknowledge the possibility.

Ghost!Donghae... broke my heart. And goddammit, he's a jerk even in death. xD Problem with your Donghae is that behind his behaving like an asshole usually lies some deep hurt that makes it impossible for you to really be angry at him for long. Despite his awful behavior, his loniless broke my heart a little. :(

[subtleslide]

lol! i totally forgot he was afraid of ghosts XD figures -_-

i'm glad you liked it! it's been a while since i've written darkfic, so i'm happy it worked out. donghae is perpetually un-hateable. like you've said, his imperfections make him more human, right?

thank bb ♥

[bonomanic]

LOL! If you hadn't said this now, people wouldn't even have realized. It would've seemed like deliberate torture of poor Donghae's soul. xD

It worked out alright, making me all depressed. D: Depressed, but happy because of the really good writing, that is. And exactly - it's a bit of a strange thing to say about a ghost character, but still. After reading over two fics with hyped up, mentally five-year-old Donghae in an act of self-destruction today, I appreciate your un-hateable jerk even more. Because the Donghae that behaves like he's on a perpetual sugar high in fics is hateable. Urgh. -.-

[benniot_91]

totally deserve a standing ovation *applause*

not a failure at all, dear. and whoah - it was an eye opener 0___0

[subtleslide]

/bows

thank you! glad you liked :D