Writings!

[subtlyunhinged]

It's been forever and I apologize.

Feedback is adored. And appreciated. And all that other good stuff.

Glimpses

I have thick skin. Now.

“Fatty! Fatty!” The kids taunt. It is elementary school. “Naay! Naaay! Make the horse noise, Fatty! It’s your name!”

I walk, quickly, dictionary tucked under my arm. I ignore all around me and the

Comments

[katamari_jason]

I might read this sometime. That time is not now. Possible comments later.

mmmmmm

[katamari_jason]

That gave me a break from my life for a couple minutes.I don't know what to say. I don't get the church crap either. I think it's good that you find happiness even if people laugh at you. Who gives a damn? Strangers can be cool, theres a lot of good out there in the world. Mmmmm and yeah, love is never wrong. Some things that people do because they "love" somebody can be wrong, misinterpretations of "love" for other feelings can be wrong, but love, in itself, is never wrong. Spread it.

Re: mmmmmm

[subtlyunhinged]

Totally agree with teh spreading love part.

But, did the thing as a whole flow? The last time I tried something like this (with sentences seperating the paragraphs and such) it turned out horrible.

And, do you think I could turn this in as a personal essay?

Re: mmmmmm

[katamari_jason]

I don't think it flowed as a whole, but it did give insight into who you are. You could turn it into an essay, but I dont think it's really near that form as it is. Yup.

[penguins_rockq]

Sorry i haven't gotten around to commenting on this. I don't haven an xanga so when i read it there I couldn't leave a comment and then i just haven't been on lj or my compy long enough but here it is:

On if it flow and what not, I agree with Jason. I like the idea you have but the sentence seperating the paragraphs,I personally don't like. It makes it not feel like a whole peice. like they're chapter titles and it's snipet from each. It makes me fell like it's missing stuff.

But like i said i like the idea you have. It lets everyone see somethings aobut you they might not get to see. And it lets those who have known you a while get to learn a little bit more about you.

sorry it's crappy. I'm so tired!

[subtlyunhinged]

lol, thanks, and get some sleep.

p.s.-the beach was fun, even if the top half of me still looks like a lobster