Comments | suburban_boho: I Saw Her Standing There Chapter 7/10

suburban_boho

I Saw Her Standing There Chapter 7/10

Mar 30, 2014 22:42

Disclaimer: I own naught, I know naught, and I'm just mucking about.

I finally decided this will be a short story, and 10 chapters is all I think it needs. I only want to show the highlights of their relationship.

Thanks to jonesingjay for encouraging me once again to just go with my gut and not think a thing into oblivion, and thanks to mollybeakers for encouraging me ( Read more... )

i saw her standing there, maureen/alice (female oc), chapter 7, fic

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jonesingjay March 31 2014, 14:05:56 UTC

It feels like this story has only just begun, but I understand knowing when to end a story. Setting a limit for yourself can be a fantastic idea. It can help with plotting out a story and the pacing of it ( ... )

suburban_boho April 1 2014, 02:30:17 UTC

Thanks for commenting ( ... )

mollybeakers April 1 2014, 01:31:49 UTC

Yep, the self pleasure scene was a brilliant thing to start with. I can't stand the porn star approach; a character who doesn't know shit, but due to their unbridled passion... they miraculously know it all. The self discovery coupled with her desire to share is a brilliant angle to take ( ... )

suburban_boho April 1 2014, 22:51:01 UTC

First, thanks for commenting ( ... )

mollybeakers April 2 2014, 03:50:22 UTC

Re: discrete

It's a common typo for discreet, hurried typing kind of thing. I wasn't even aware it was actually a word until a couple of years ago... and rarely remember its meaning, therefore never use it.

;)

You're doing great! Keep it up.

JB